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Cardinal sin of the 3rd chapter killed the book before it even started...why would you 'sign post' the events like that.... would you waste time reading a revenge novel if the 1st chapter was betrayal and the 1800th chapter was the revenge ending...??? I read how this novel starts....and by chapter 3 you tell me the events that happen in the middle and how it ends...+ in the title... I dnt care where mc sticks his dick. you killed all mystery and suspence..... you better make mint excuses in the comments as to why people should care about the in-between of this novel, because its ultimately pointless now.....
if you enjoy bdsm or choking, you might like this because it will never have a "feels good" moment where you actually root for the MC to succeed if you dont.... the MC is far too unstable and selfconcious of what other people think... this novel should be called "isekai without confidence" because without it, he kills the young and dumb then proceeds to have a 30 chapter monologue on mortality or an obvious mental breakdown over and over and over..... how are people telling me this is character growth??? same mental handicap over and over. Atleast Supreme Magus had the counterbalance to avoid constant depression...this has nothing so it has to take copium 3 times a day... it's also quite sad on the imagination that the "sword god" only weilds a large nail as a weapon for the majority of what I read...you can do better...
man is this a messy novel, so much happens in the 1st 100 that the storyline progress blurs, you forget alot because their is no break in-between, nor is there quest rewards given??just penalties and loot... chain of garbage. what quest they are up to? what stats they have? what's the max stats cap? why the cap change? (you have to question this because MC gets like 500 million stats he now uses as currency?)
dear lord this is the one the MC gets brainwashed early and never gets his own identity. no thanks. Pushed and pulled, op vs trash but weak againt plot. this is not a fulfilling story. it's not even a story about the MC. he's a mouse in a maze and characters that get made up on the spot dictate the MC direction. how can a reader invest empathy or even understanding the MC when little bye-bye forget me powder is a plot point. makes transmigration pointless. decion making pointless.
Overall Good read, Skips in levels start to happen to escape the monotony but disconnects the reader from the MC, kinda a negative. Also alot of things are pre-implied in volume 1 (ch1-450ish) that lose the value of mystery it once had in further chapters. you might find yourself saying "I already knew that", instead of any kind of *surprise* an event might mean to have. Just things to know if you're using reviews to decide to read or not.
Goal justification is truly bad in c335-336. Noble fear??? Global concern?? How can you put "these gun users/people are useless to me" and "do you know how many elders died? Families separated..." in the same justification. Mana "invaded" Earth and has no emotional rational so how can it aim to 'step on your head?' You introduced it as a natural event then backtrack... The world got mana same time everywhere... so all things stay roughly the same lvl/order over time relative to environment, so he could have gone looking for his family much earlier. Your rationall of he needs an army to get to his family far away won't ever make any sence. China's infrastructure is dense enough that he could make it town to town, alone or with a small team.
Horrible "MC is fastest at leveling / Strongest in the universe, this is unprecedented." I hate this so much. Out of trillions of beings in the universe you chose to craft a snowflake. Just makes it so pretentious for a guy with plot armor. It's cringe when you say it within the 1st 10 chapters, it's worse when you repeat it every 100 chapters after.