Reviews of Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

One of the best pokemon fanfic I have ever seen have potential to be the no1 pokemon fanfic if the story continues as it is & an increase in updates.Waiting for more

The story is honestly getting boring. After 110 chapters the story still hasnt progressed to the main part. The mc is still 4 years old. Much time is wasted by explaining his daily life or just some random item he finds, that arent really good. The plot would be really good if the author would reduce it to the important encounters. For example 4 chapters were used to describe the mc going to the beach and describing the pokemon that life there (just marills,…)

Until chap 12 (Acutual) is one of the best FF of pokemon by far, everything is explained and logical, you have my thx for this masterpiece :) ( usually I am pretty harsh with reviews)

This story has three main problems for menthat ruin it. The first is the absolute info dumps. It is good that the authir is putting in the work to make everything understanding but it is way too much info. The second is how incredibly slow paced it is. It seems that the author does not want to speed up the story, but he has the protagonist doing expiriments at two years old. Just time skip to when he leaves it would be so much more interesting that a 100 chapter prologue. That last thing is the terrible dialogue. It is so forced and unnatural that it is a but painful to read. Instead of a normal back and forth dialougue between characters they say everything to the person in one sentence and the other party responds in one long sentence. I think if the author just spends less time on backround info fixed the conversations and just put in a couple of timeskips until he reached the age to start his journey this book would be improved

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A bit boring, to graphomanic, but overall is fine i guess comparing to other pokemon ff, however "master of tactics" is much more interesting

Though it is great and interesting, the amount of info dump is mortifying . . . .

you can clearly see the effort of the author in this novel not only in the grammar but the details and the choice of mc "cheats". author dont simple chose and write without think in the future troubles that choice will have on the world. we can't forget while the first 10-11 chapters are info dump mc tried to write in a way that people that dont like can tolerate it(as a info dump lover I don't know if I'm being biased). This novel entered in top 10 of all Pokemon fanfic together with :1- Sacrifice and Subjugation by MetalDargon ,2- The Natural by lightningwarrior215, 3- Ascension by The BlackStaff and NightMarE, 4- Traveler by The Straight Elf, 5- Born Of Caution by Fuggmann, 6- Cobalt to Coal to Diamond by KyKyuKai, 7- Welcome to the (insane) world of Pokemon by CaptainMoonshine, 8- Pokemon Jordinio Version! by 0 Jordinio 0, 9- Chalenger by darkfire1220 and finally 10- Conquer by Twubs that now this fic take the place. with this you can see how much I love this

I was so bored by this novel that i actually started studying for once in my life. info dumps galore, half of each chapter is allocated to info dumps it's incredibly annoying to read, the pacing of the novel is horribly slow barely anything happens in a chapter other than getting blasted with info dumps. you might think a slow pacing isn't always bad but in this case it is, since you have to read a paragraph of info dumps followed by a paragraph of the most boring slice of life and the only thing he skips are the Pokémon battles which is mind boggling to have a pokemon novel that just skips over the majority of battles but goes into detail about every nook and cranny of the world like an encyclopedia. the author really doesn't respect your time.

From what I read so far, which is admittedly not too much because there are 2 chapters out at the moment, the story seems to be interesting. I hope it keeps being interesting in the future and i am eagerly waiting for new chapters.

I don't understand who the demographic for this novel is.. its like 500 chapters of fanfic info dumps. it would be like reading an incorrect version of the Pokémon wiki. The mc is a child for basically the entire novel which I always find weird. I get its a Pokémon fic but why are we reading about his breast feeding days for like 50 chapters. This is all before I mention the cultivation nonsense the author adds. It's like this novel is a weird Chinese Pokémon AU wiki page. Baited so hard with these xp/fake reviews.

good written fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Easily one of the best Pokemon fan fics. By far the best take on the whole Pokemon potential system that most fanfics have. The only downside is how slow it is.

Alright I’ll be honest, at first I was discouraged by the fact that it was AU, but not that I’ve read it, I would place it as the best pokemon fanfic I’ve ever read. The world building is fantastic and I can’t wait for the MC to start exploring. I love that the author kept the family aspect, and the overall writing quality is great. Honestly a 5/5 for me. I just hope that the author doesn’t drop this part way through or I’ll be disappointed.

This review is only for the first 7 chapters, overall okay pokemon fanfic with emphasis in world building but the way it is done is through info dumps like literal this is the world this is what's in it and who are the powerhouses in each regions. Spoiler: firsts few chapters is more haggling with a ROB and following chapter is info dump galore

so we have a decent writing, massive word count, consistent updates and a detailed world background. On Paper this might sound a good catch, but no, it feels like a chore reading this. 0 story development at all, it's a classic case of all tell and zero show. I can't see an ounce of Pokemon vibe here. Author made everything seem realistic and that's not just Pokemon, I want to feel the magic and nostalgia, not some info dumps that no fan ever bothered to know or care about.

It is a fun book, slow paced, but enjoyable for those looking for a light read. The kid is preparing well for his adventure making his pokemon get a high enough potential. I wonder how his adventure will be and who is going to become his rival through all of this. Well good luck and please dont drop it, I have seen enough good novels that got dropped sadly

I Love it and Hope for more! It reads very very fluently and the writer has thought of everything. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍

Interesting story.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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