Review Detail of Humbuub in Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

so we have a decent writing, massive word count, consistent updates and a detailed world background. On Paper this might sound a good catch, but no, it feels like a chore reading this. 0 story development at all, it's a classic case of all tell and zero show. I can't see an ounce of Pokemon vibe here. Author made everything seem realistic and that's not just Pokemon, I want to feel the magic and nostalgia, not some info dumps that no fan ever bothered to know or care about.