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Kenrio

Kenrio

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I love novel and otaku culture

2017-09-18 JoinedBrazil
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio1mth
    Posted

    Author should use the gay tag. And web novel should make the cuck/ntr tag and polycule tag so only these that like can read. Really a low blow of grim to make use harem tag to bait people in reading without warning the other fetish of mc like being a bi and liking to be a cuck

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    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio1mth
    Posted

    I think the excuse you gave for the mc was a litle too unimaginative when everyone read in know you're simple forving mc to be slider so he can falow the plot. And while I'm happy about this site having more fanfiction of yugioh gx I noted that it's extremely cliche and repeated scene of mc participating in the exams with the peanut gallery commenting, to the point I thought it's was one I already read before.you could simple skipped the peanut gallery dialogue. Other minor things I noticed and breaker a litle of the immersion is that sometimes you suddenly go from first pov to third. And you switching quick-spell card for speed spell card that is from yugioh 5ds

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    Yu-Gi-Oh GX! Aim For The Pros!
    Anime & Comics · Glace
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Posted

    Mc says how he don't fear batman but goes on a lengthy monologue on why he don't want to displease batman clearly showing he does fear batman. It's really anoying how much of a sucker he for the heroes and even more so for batman

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    The Game Cafe in Marvel and DC
    Movies · AngelusSanguis
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Posted

    Other than the grammar the fic is trash. For some reason mc want to go on a goose Chase and find a way to go back to his world even if he is in a extremely low fantasy world, already passed countless years and can't forget he have another body. Chance is that if he go back everyone will be dead already. And the worst of it is that auhtor don't make mc think about any of these questions, nor author explain why mc reached the logic that he have a chance to go back. In the end a fic that synopses make you want to read but 2 chapter already want to make you rage quit by how frustanting and lack in details it is

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    Reborn Inside How To Train Your Dragon World
    Movies · Dungeo
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Posted

    For some reason the supposed god don't expect for some lowly mortal to simple exploit the loophole like mc and make a wish that give him many power, the more ridiculous thing is to see this god permitting mc negotiate to what powers he can have. What's is worse is the excuse auhtor give is straigh up trash. To make things worse we have other reincarnator

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    Madara in the Avatar World
    Anime & Comics · KojiSan
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Commented

    I can see that this fic will fall in the rank, it have to litle content in each chapter the only thing that was balancing this was the 3 chapters

    Ch 306 Unbelievable Ending
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    Tycoon of Video Games
    Video Games · NewComer714
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Replied to Benoit_Valtin

    ?mc fruit is earthquake fruit not gravity fruit

    Ch 8 8
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    Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe
    Movies · Story_Teller_229
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Posted

    For some reason even with mc have white beard powers and potential author decide to give mc the super soldier serum. As for why, author simple don't give a reason

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    Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe
    Movies · Story_Teller_229
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Posted

    Author destroyed the fic by making 2 mook villain being able to attack the house of the number 2 hero. You know how much stupid this is? Even worse when mc parents that are endeavor best friend are at the forefron in security technology, man this is in the top 10 mos stupid moment in fic I ever see. Anothe thing that make this fic so bad is author giving mc a extremely ok quirk in a low level world like mha

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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Commented

    ... wow you really know how to destroy a fic huh

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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Replied to The_Zen_Boy

    Fandom is no cannon

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 : The Beginning After The End
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    Naruto : The Flow Artist
    Anime & Comics · The_Zen_Boy
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Posted

    First chapter alone start with a huge plot hole showing how much thought auhtor really put into this. Robbers try to steal from a ANIME store this don't even make sense why woul somoene do that, and worst these robber have guns in a country where no even the police have guns, by this first chapter alone you can see how brainless this fic is

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    Naruto : The Flow Artist
    Anime & Comics · The_Zen_Boy
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio2mth
    Commented

    If he aweken the op op fruit I'm 100% sure that will be enough. Even weak fruit become op when awekened, imagine one like his

    Ch 3 3 Trick
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    Naruto: A Different Power
    Anime & Comics · Sato_Yuki_4787
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio3mth
    Posted

    Can read past chapter 1 the fact mc as kid withou knowing how to fight can fight against adult that know magic is ridiculous, even more so when he fights many at the same time. Even worst is that author simple give mc 3 cheat withou any explanation of why only now he is gaining it

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    Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
    Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio3mth
    Posted

    A trash fic from a trash author .........................................................................................................................................

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    The Marvel-Overwatch Journey (old copy rewrite up)
    Movies · TryingMyBest
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio3mth
    Posted

    Here I thought this would be a good fic but it's nothing more than another trash wish fulfilment where the author don't even think before writing and become full of major plot holes

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    Marvel: System Maker.
    Anime & Comics · Faceless_Prick
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio3mth
    Commented

    Here I thought this would be a good fic but it's nothing more than another trash wish fulfilment where the author don't even think before writing and become full of major plot holes

    Ch 3 [Chapter—3]
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    Marvel: System Maker.
    Anime & Comics · Faceless_Prick
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio3mth
    Posted

    The most edgy and angst shit I ever read in my life, I don't know how people can read more than one chapter of this shit inducing cringe fic

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    Survival of a Loner MARVEL
    Anime & Comics · daoistofeverything
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio3mth
    Commented

    Trash dialogue

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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    Chainsaw Man: Playing With The Devils
    Anime & Comics · blazuki
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  • Kenrio
    Kenrio3mth
    Commented

    Mc could make a pokemon game where after player make a special mission with porygon the digital world of digimon is added to the equation. It can even have other games appear because exist pokemon with the power to open portals to other universes. Porygo-z itself is mentioned in the pokedex to be able to shut through dimensions

    Ch 160 160 - Negotiations
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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    Movies · NunuXD
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