People really pay to read this trash? Can't be live how low webnovel read he to make contract with author that is amateur and lazy, if he was only a beginer but put more effort in it it would be cool but this fic is completely brainless showing how much thought was really put into it, that is 0

I was liking this fic before this change trash chapter made me lose all interest

The grammar is trash for a contracted novel and the dialogue is completely idiotic. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel. Another completely thing is how every 6 year old is playing better than adults, author clearly don't made his research before this, you should know that at this age kid are developing their coordination and muscle so for the to do what is described is ridiculuos. The fic have a great premise but the execution is trash on all levels

Forced myself to read more and not only the grammar don't become better, but the dialogue is completely idiot. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel

Trash fic that, this shit is not even good as wish fulfilment. Author make the stupid decision of making mc pay 600M for using dc for 5 years and even then give 10% of the profits to another company and the excuse he give Is extremely shit, even more so when dc in this universe don have ANY good film or cartoon, the mc is literally making dc more famous and valuable only to lose all right 5 years later

Trash fic. Male me extremely annoyed when author forced the plot and made satsuki act like a out of charcter bitch and forge mc name when registering him, simple for the hiding identy shit trope, not only make me hate the author with this forced plot but satsuki with how bitch of a act this is.

...trash forced plot to hide his identy, I will stop here before I become more annoyed with this trash fic

Author purposefully created a mentally changed mc so it's more easy to have charcter development, and become easier to write mc. The fact that he don't try to use the full potential of his power and the only excuse we receive is author in the comments talking how mc don't need more power to deal with weak human and need money is trash. If mc using itens that can make him invincible why he wouldn't use it? This would never hapen in real life anyone would want to be invencible to the point that nothing can hurt you and those you love. So if author did not want mc to use the full potent of his power he should simple put restrictions on it not make this shit thing

This fic is like cartoon of 90s many nonsensical thins happen without author even trying a litle to give a excuse why that happened. Like mc buy 100 sex doll and for some reason exist a company that can create life like doll with real personalities too, why such advanced technology that is able to create real life being exist? Even the author don't know

Yeah,don't know why I was such ass in this commentary without even reading the fic completely, probaly was in a bad day and simple put my frustration of the day on the review. Don't know if i shoul take delete or not

Extremely amazing fic, the type of fic I live the most to read. Don't even know why the first time I read the first few chapter I wads such a ass to presume what would happen in the future and commented. I read all the current chapters and have to say this story is a complete upgrade of what it was inspired by. One thing I alway thought it was a regret about a that Chinese fic is how mc only focus on games only an nothing more but this here is completely diferent, I'm really lovin it thank for the hard work and sorry to be a Hater in the past

This is translation right? Because if not, this is literally a copy paste of a Chinese novel. And tour excuse how it will become diferent from the original is pretty trash, you should simple not copy paste from the begining

In the future he explain why he want a tavern? The time he waste taking care of it and the money wasted on it could be used do many more useful things

For someone so intelligent he is really stupid. He have problems with resources but don't try to create some kind of organization to help him (preferably a company)

Mc is a kid but act like a adult(he is not si). The system have emotions. Mc is mentioned to be identical to his father but people that is his father friend cant recognize him. Mc for some reason decide to go in the junkyard and "coincidentally" find a katana. And to conclude the dialogues are super strange

So punchin and kicking are separate skills but science that is a extremely broad area is only one skill? What kind of choice choice is that ?

The moment he is show on not havin spirit power you already can see this trash will be another faceslaping fic. And we can't forget the fact the system have a personality to make things even worse

Why beast boy have psych powers? The amalgam version don't have this. You should put in the summary that this beast boy don't have only transformations powers. The only reason I'm ever reading this was for that . And can't forget the fact of how messy the world is. by chapter 5 i decided to stop by how confusing this shit is

Yeah I Wil stop here, I can't see a reason why law would eever accept joining his crew when he have one himself in the future.

Genderbend mc are disgusting. And if people can give 5 star for this author without even reading and giving some shit excuse I can do it too. I hate Yuri shit