Ruos
After chapter three I feel the need to change my metaphoric 5 star review in an actual 5 star review because our MC has an Aegishlash or better an Honedge as an starter. So please my friends let us all enjoy this anomaly of an pokemon fanfic together [img=recommend]. Other than that is the Writing Quality good without any for me cognizant flaws. For Story Development is the start generic and its the pokemon world so what could I say to Background. Updades come like a river so everything is till now a way above average fanfiction with the potential to become something more...
The story is rushed, barely describing its surroundings or characters (the MC and his family aren't even described their hair color or appearance in the slightest),he keeps complaining about training his pokemons well... which is a lie because the author just skips everything and makes him get a Slowbro and simply says a sentence "It's been X months/years and Pokemon X got strong", he simply hides his psychic powers from everyone, even his parents, and figures out how to train himself, even though his family is rich. Being quite honest, if you just want a fanfic to pass the time because you have nothing to read, it's worth reading this one,but if you are bothered by an insipid world and a bad development of the story, I recommend looking for another fic.
Its a good story, great pokemon choice, nice unique origin. I love how the story is progressing as well. doing more than just training like creating apps and helping advance the world as definitely a plus too. Only negative for me is the humor. this is just my opinion, what makes us laugh is subjective but I havent laughed once, the jokes, mostly made by the talking pokemon fall flat and only ends up breaking the immersion I love when reading fanfics. and the fact that some random dude is his pokemon is weird, could of just left that out even if its part of canon lore. Other than that there is nothing I can say wrong about the story. definitely should give it a read if you haven't.