Review Detail of BrazillianFox in Pokemon: Aichi Sendou

The story is rushed, barely describing its surroundings or characters (the MC and his family aren't even described their hair color or appearance in the slightest),he keeps complaining about training his pokemons well... which is a lie because the author just skips everything and makes him get a Slowbro and simply says a sentence "It's been X months/years and Pokemon X got strong", he simply hides his psychic powers from everyone, even his parents, and figures out how to train himself, even though his family is rich. Being quite honest, if you just want a fanfic to pass the time because you have nothing to read, it's worth reading this one,but if you are bothered by an insipid world and a bad development of the story, I recommend looking for another fic.