Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Pokemon: Aichi Sendou

Its a good story, great pokemon choice, nice unique origin. I love how the story is progressing as well. doing more than just training like creating apps and helping advance the world as definitely a plus too. Only negative for me is the humor. this is just my opinion, what makes us laugh is subjective but I havent laughed once, the jokes, mostly made by the talking pokemon fall flat and only ends up breaking the immersion I love when reading fanfics. and the fact that some random dude is his pokemon is weird, could of just left that out even if its part of canon lore. Other than that there is nothing I can say wrong about the story. definitely should give it a read if you haven't.