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Zaelum

Zaelum

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A pervert. But a nice one.

2017-05-30 JoinedChile
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum11h
    Posted

    So far, pretty good. I can see a lot of potential, but I hope that you can take your time and not fast paced to much. So we can see some character growth and not just a wish filling fanfic.

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    Pokemon : Conqueror
    Anime & Comics · AceOfHearts18
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum3d
    Commented

    Quite good, this type of parts in a novel always make the characters more 'alive' and not just a bunch of NPCs.

    Ch 52 Chapter : 49 Filler
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    My Hero Academia : The Symbol of Power
    Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum3d
    Posted

    Well, is only the beginning of the fanfic so I can't really make a good opinion so I'll just write this review to support you! [img=recommend]

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    I Got Reincarnated In The World of Attack on Titan as a Baby!?
    Anime & Comics · Levaa
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum3d
    Commented

    Eden Ragnell. I use it as the name of my characters in all games like for, 15 years.

    Ch 442 I'm looking for the right name lol
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    One Piece Gold List: The Strongest Teacher!
    Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum8d
    Commented
    - the MC will be shrouded in flames, transforming in a big man wearing a flight suit and body armor. He gains raw superhuman strength, speed and power in this form.
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    Imagine Breaker in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Geraint124x
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum11d
    Posted

    Pretty good! Here for you! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum11d
    Replied to Fallen_Crown

    Take your time! (not to much) Here a present for you!

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    Pokemon: An Ashy Start
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum12d
    Posted

    It has potential. It's pretty good, so far. Now I except the MC to travel more around and fight more, and get to do all quest (I did). Thanks you!

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    Elden Ring: Transmigration
    Video Games · THE_P1AN1ST
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum12d
    Commented

    Juan. The best name for an MC!

    Name: Primis Rigla
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    The First and The Final Ruler of Omniverse
    Anime & Comics · Lakshay_Thakur_9837
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum14d
    Posted

    Nice!! Quite fun and interesting! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

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    Naruto: Our Goal Is To Dig Every Corner of Konoha
    Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum15d
    Commented
    Shaking his head, he walked over to the porch of his home and slid open the thin door leading to the main hallway. After slipping his feet into some indoor slippers, he ambled down the main hallway and casually observed the paintings of the last five generations of his ancestors until reaching a door leading to another hallway, which he followed until reaching an old-fashioned paneled wood sliding door. Sliding the door open, warm air drifted out, relaxing his weary soul. He closed the door behind him after entering, removed his clothing, and tossed it into a basket full of dirty clothes. Then, he removed the slippers and showered before dropping his body into the private outdoor hot spring owned by his family. He soaked in the warm bath with arms spread out and resting on the edge of the decorative carved stone edge. His lips curled up into a contented smile, and his eyes closed as the warmth seeped into his sore muscles and bones.
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    Just Another Multiverse Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · TrashHeap
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum15d
    Posted

    Not bad, well wrote, a self-insert Ash. An AU. A pretty good combination that can make a really interesting Pokemon fanfic. Good Job! If I can see enough chapter and it keeps with the same quality I wouldn't mind joining your patreon or something like that! Also Harem for LIFE!!!!

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    Pokemon: An Ashy Start
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum15d
    Posted

    We need more OPPAIS!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Journey to the One Piece
    Anime & Comics · thelightedghost
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum18d
    Posted

    Pretty good, just lacks updates, hopefully we get to read an end to this fanfic. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

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    Primaeval Failure
    Anime & Comics · Dreizehnn
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum18d
    Commented

    If it wasn't for the lack of updates this would be me favorite fanfic at the moment...

    Ch 5 Boom Bi-
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    Primaeval Failure
    Anime & Comics · Dreizehnn
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum23d
    Commented

    RIP

    Ch 21 Notice
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    Impaler In Boruto ( R-18 )
    Anime & Comics · Impaler
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum23d
    Posted

    We're really lacking some good Fate fanfics right now. Thanks you! [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

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    Fate/Transcendent
    Anime & Comics · Dreizehnn
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum23d
    Commented

    +9999

    A Pokemon Fanfic? (Not decided)
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    Naruto : Tales of Obito Uchiha
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum24d
    Commented

    That's why you should always use 'protection'!

    [A/N: I've caught some sickness for a few days now (not the c*vid, just a stomachache into fever kind of deal) and will need a break on releases for a bit (out of stocked chaps). I tried writing despite feeling bad, and it was a delirium ridden mess. I will come back to write as soon as I can! Thanks for your support!]
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    Naruto: Aburame Malaria
    Anime & Comics · ThugB
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  • Zaelum
    Zaelum25d
    Commented

    I felt some 'real' hate, author...

    Roshi loved harem stories, but when it came to real life, and the protagonist wasn't him, it felt like being in a world where you're bound to get NTRed. That's the worst! There's a pretty girl in sight? Well, that's from the harem protagonist! Shitty harem stories!
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    Yamcha RPG
    Anime & Comics · BucketOfShirts
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