Reviews of Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

I can't even describe my amazement Its just wow never in my life did I read such a good book I've read the first chapter and directly read all chapters you have massive talent and I sincerely hope that you don't drop this

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MC is a bad guy, he kills people, he lies, and he's manipulative. The dude does what he can to stay alive in a crazy world and you can't really blame him for it. I'd say his only negative is he has zero care for anybody in this world except himself. Dude is a douch, but he only does what's necessary to stay alive and become immortal.

One of the best novels you can find here about evil MC, the story is so good with a smooth transition between all the chapters that you will enter a trance within the first words. All in all an amazing novel that I hope that it will not be dropped.

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I love this more than I should. The mc is the best I've seen in a fanfic in a LONG time. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Really love the evil mc... Although, it's not a perfect novel but it comes pretty close... Love how you didn't care what the people were saying and just ran with the plot you planned earlier... I can't wait for it to reach canon timeline and then shippuuden...

The story is fun, the MC is a villaneous type, I love how the story is real, it ain't like those other fan fic novels where side characters have no personalities and are one sided robot. The MC is selfish but who isn't? He has his reason when u read into his flashback. Everyone psychology is different so I won't judge the MC why he is being evil and not nice. The novel is 'unique' Read to find out more

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To be completely honest I have nothing bad to say about this book. It absolutely blew me away the development is absolutely fantastic, it explains the Naruto world in the best way that I've seen in fanfics, while most cannot relate with the mc everyone reading can appreciate how smart he is, he is absolutely cold blooded, and will do whatever it takes to survive, and grow stronger. I literally loved this sh*t so much I paid for a subscription on patreon just so I could read further, and read his other story's which might I add are also incredible

First of all i ain't that good at English nor am I a professional critic just writing what I feel so let's get started. Writing quality :- I won't say it's particularly great but enough to understand what's going on and the emotions behind them (sometimes not) Update stability :- 1 chapter a day sometimes not if something gone wrong in real life . Not great but good (even if the author releases 10 chaps a day i won't be satisfied!!) Story development :- general cliche with something new, with a lot of time skips (i mean a lot). Mc reincarnates knowing the plot of the story with higher the average starting point nothing more ( i mean nothing not even the plot armour) World background :- the world doesn't really roll around the mc but it doesn't work on its own either meaning the butterfly doesn't work on the whole world, like a real world. But it does work, follows the canon with changes around the people mc comes into contact with. Overall decent. Character development :- becuz the mc had started matureing because of different tragedies in his early life he became a psycho who had goals in his life but didn't get get a chance because of the world he lives in. But since he got a chance he want to do that (and something more) before that he has to survive and he will literally do anything to do that. In the story his character doesn't change much but because of the people around him and becuz of his of his actions he took only hardens his resolve per will to pursue immortality and more(I don't know about the future though). Side characters are only important until they lose their value to mc to which he either kills them or they're sidelined. Overall I like the mc more. At least for me the novel was great so don't drop it in the middle like every other fanfic out there😔. GOOD LUCK!!!👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥

Best Naruto fanfic 🔥

Cool story🙂.

Chapter 88 Overall a good read if you ignore his rambling on how he will never treat his mother like family, the dumb inuzuka clan head, and how he kill his teammate.

I would highly advise this book to be read. The MC is a great character, a mix between a sociopath and a psychopath, which is something I like very much. The MC makes mostly sound and good decisions so no dumb MC, and he is truly ruthless not that cold MC sh*t where in fact the MC is a big softy, not this is truly ruthless. The O C's that the author created also authentic and possible. The flow of the story is great and every chapter makes sense, the way the conclusion is reached, how a problem starts, etc. is believable. All in all, I enjoy the story and highly recommend it to be read, it's probably one of the best Naruto fan fic's out there (At least in my opinion).

It’s cleverly written with really good grammar, and it is a pretty dark take on the ninja world which is pretty unique to the site. The Mc is pretty great as well, he’s pretty similar to Leylin as far as his ruthlessness goes. Um ya. Not really my cup of tea but for what it is it’s good stuff.

Author needs to work on spelling. Just a simple re read would of caught them. As I only read 2 ch. before I couldn't take it anymore, giving 3 stars in everything but writing quality, which is a 1 til you get an editor or something.

few chapters and I'm getting sick of how the story play out getting stronger with no importance is a boring life full of hurdles

My noble duty is to find harem novels that try to hide from the world by not saying they are in fact- harem..........................................

really good story, i would recommend it for veteran authors, mc trying to get stronger and survive, he has no armor plot luck or anything, mc focuses on one goal and try to achieve it also manages to survive various plots politicians and various fights using his wit, I highly recommend that you continue reading the story even if you don't like something because it is really worth it because it is really a quality story, excellent writing, excellent world background, characters faithful to the original even if with some changes thanks to the mc (it's noticeable and it's not like if mc does something nothing is affected, so this makes the story more real), even if it seems cold and calculating it's not quite but try to stay so not to die, still a great story