Review Detail of Might_Cho in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Item: Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
Rating: 3.8

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Might_ChoLv134yrMight_Cho

Chapter 88 Overall a good read if you ignore his rambling on how he will never treat his mother like family, the dumb inuzuka clan head, and how he kill his teammate.

Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

HolyJoker

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HolyJokerAuthorHolyJoker

😑😑😑 it's supposed to be like that... the MC is selfish and will do anything that benefits him...

4yr

Might_ChoLv13Might_Cho

Well its personal opinion, I like villain, selfih MC who prioritize benefits, but he has has bottom line. And the review below 4 is because the lack of character depth beside the MC, but story wise the quality of later half of your novel is great.

HolyJoker:😑😑😑 it's supposed to be like that... the MC is selfish and will do anything that benefits him...

4yr

HolyJokerAuthorHolyJoker

😑😑😑😑hmmmmm.... I will take that since this is my first story ever.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Might_Cho:Well its personal opinion, I like villain, selfih MC who prioritize benefits, but he has has bottom line. And the review below 4 is because the lack of character depth beside the MC, but story wise the quality of later half of your novel is great.

4yr

Might_ChoLv13Might_Cho

You are doing great for your first novel, your second one would lot better

HolyJoker:😑😑😑😑hmmmmm.... I will take that since this is my first story ever.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

4yr