Review Detail of LavishSquirrel in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Item: Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

LavishSquirrelLv104yrLavishSquirrel

Author needs to work on spelling. Just a simple re read would of caught them. As I only read 2 ch. before I couldn't take it anymore, giving 3 stars in everything but writing quality, which is a 1 til you get an editor or something.

Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

HolyJoker

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HolyJokerAuthorHolyJoker

The grammar gets better in the later chapters, I haven't gotten grammar complains in them yet. Also english is not my first language.... and I don't have the money to get an editor.

4yr

HolyJokerAuthorHolyJoker

Well my story went from 4.7* to 4.6* I am not sad or anything 😥 something just got in my eyes 😭... 'Men don't cry, they just moisten their eyes...' - by HolyJoker (Just joking I am not really mad at least you weren't like another guy who left a 1* and didn't say anything in the review... I am mad at that guy... *Liam Neeson voice* And I have a particular lack of skills So I won't be able to find him or k!ll him. 😁

4yr

Conqueror1Lv12Conqueror1

Manly tears 😭

4yr