JCT
I like fanfic , harem , romance and mecha ... I don't usually read cultivator type of novels unless i don't have any new thing to read I especially ignore/ bash/ alien racist type of novel
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change the title and synopsis the readers will be twitching expecting something but in reverse like expecting starship as a main world due to the synopsis but due to the lack of chapters in the main world the expectations turned confused of sort 😅 in turned into just a game scenematic from gameplay with a self insert
nah , the whole story is focused on Warhammer 🥴 while the rest are fast forward type log chaps Warhammer as mainworld since it consistent of the chapter while the rest world only contians few chaps Just Warhammer fanfic , the system
i was expecting starship troopers world and the rest are extra spice tech procurement you should change the title 🧐 the novel in a more appropriate cause this novel contains almost all Warhammer so far while the starship troopers as main world was treated as fast word type I'll change my review once i readt it whole I'm currently at the half its not it's not bad the title turn it bad
hope this isn't a face slapping novel and has too much fast forward like the some silly cn fanfic
🤦 those joke are spoken by a true lunatic
being a gay is hellstuck up , wouldn't be able to contribute in a gene pool that's there end line even if your rich /poor so long as you're gay which unable to reproduce then your out from science and religionfor muslim it's religious beliefs respect
it's literally immoral 😂 you can't sugar coated such thing think about it if your a male or even a female for now since your in your teens its fine but think about it if you turned into a mother or a father either era of man values are degrading as we speak due to this kind of reading material or phrase 😑🤤😂🤣
🤤 oh this smells Racist stuff let's read some more before i bash this novel 😁
yeah i know pal 😑 loved halo series i can stomach the creation of spartan 2 , but creation of spartan 3 🥲 i can't but i love the plot btwi was just wishing spartan 3 soldier gets to be spared and equiped at least in fanfic giving them chance for survival
there's no disposable soldier only disposable commander and thats a commander who only sit on his desk without giving priority to the safety of his men
😑 good thing this is just fanfic , or game related idiotic commander he is if a commander can't provide enough protection for his army then he is but a trash, deploying ill equiped soldiers in a battlefield is the biggest mistake in war
Hi author my advice in regards to people who commented on you harshly without helping is ignore them there 3 types of reader 1. hypocrite - all they know is to criticize the book especially the novels that are free ( except for novels that has racism ,drug promotion sort of stuff)2. good reader/mentor - those who criticize you and suggest good output example of this are the people who suggested using apps (then again in the long run you would eventually learn how to properly construct , just take your time )3.humble reader - people who learn to adopt and reconstruc your novel through the mind even if its incorrect btw 🤔 becareful religion, racism , politics , oh additional children it taste bad involving dying kids on a story