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My throne

aleksandra_pano10

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iMaM786
iMaM786Lv2iMaM786

The Novel is Good I like how the story goes on and I will be adding it to my library, so I can read it with the other novels and I really like this story Moreover, the writing always attract me to novel this one

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Chuzi
ChuziLv2Chuzi

The novel is a work in progress. The story is very straight forward and attracts readers easily. The character Design is not generic like others you may find on this site. The gradual errors can easily be shrugged of because the story is worth it! It's a original idea, Keep it up author five stars from me 😊

vesnxx
vesnxxLv3vesnxx

Im only reading books with strong female characters it seems ;P amazing work on building such a strong, independqnt heroin. Every woman should read a story like this one to feel the power of this woman. Amazing story, easily readable 😁❤

Ingram_Strand
Ingram_StrandLv1Ingram_Strand

The characters are developing seamlessly and the dialogue is interesting in particular because of the way information is revealed about the world that these characters live in. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4Ninestar619_5803

WOW SO COOL STORY!!! I really loved it. The writing style is so good and clear to understand. The beginning of the story is too attractive that it shows the potential of the author how great he will take it. I give it five stars. it's really awesome. Please keep it now. We want to see who will win and how? KEEP going you can do it

Winter_E_Woodes
Winter_E_WoodesLv1Winter_E_Woodes

TLDR; The plot is nice, it's a girl power fantasy adventure, and the plot line seems to be moving in a fairly dark and dramatic direction. If you are alright with being patient in waiting for a more concrete world building outline and can overlook a certain amount of grammar issues, it's honestly worth a try for younger readers. The character descriptions are very appearance focused, which I find unfortunate, and it takes me a good couple of lines of dialogue to really sus out their personalities, other than the protagonist who is unequivocally headstrong, impulsive and stubborn in the "strong martial arts FL" kind of way. The writing quality varies quite a bit, and the formatting changes between early and later chapters (I would recommend changing the earlier ones to match the later ones, since the author seems more comfortable with it). There are also a good deal of spelling errors, but getting a decent reading experience regardless is absolutely possible, especially if one reads fast and likes a fast paced story like this one. The competition is fairly outlined, but it gets a little confusing everyone being equally casual with each other as well as the very different names, namely Japanese, Korean, some Eurocentric ones (French and English specifically, I believe), and more. The universe is a little confusing so far, but the focused plot does help with it quite a bit.

JulyFantasy
JulyFantasyLv1JulyFantasy

First of all, the synopsis attracted me to read the story, and it’s a genre that i like (magic/mystery/royalty) and I recommend it to anyone who likes these genres too. The way the story/characters are set up draws me in. Although there are only a few chapters now, I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!

TheOneWho_Asked
TheOneWho_AskedLv1TheOneWho_Asked

So... I've read a few chapter and the author has a lot of work to do grammar wise. Especially with the way the characters talk. I recommend an editor or proofreading your work. The story is unique and enjoyable.

Zherie17
Zherie17Lv1Zherie17

Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Grammatical errors can be improved since there are a lot that I noticed and proper placing of punctuation marks as well. Story wise, it did bore me a bit but good job, Author.

Debbie_Asan
Debbie_AsanLv12Debbie_Asan

first of all, I love the FL she is fierce, and a strong female character and I am loving her vibes. I love the solid friendship in the story. I can't wait for the adventures and conquest that await the characters! Interesting story anyway. Good job author.

PerkyPompous_Pixie
PerkyPompous_PixieLv4PerkyPompous_Pixie

An interesting take on Royals and competition as Ryoko takes over her brother's role. Love the twist in the third chapter. I think if the story is fleshed out a little bit, it would attract more readers. On a side note, I would advise you to proofread your work. Some errors could be fixed which may enhance the reading experience. All the best🥳

Bella_Jackos
Bella_JackosLv10Bella_Jackos

Just reading the synopsis had me captivated the plot is great I love it and how you made the FL strong is just chef's kiss keep updating cause I'll be reading this

_Rockbison_
_Rockbison_Lv3_Rockbison_

There are not many chapters uploaded but what l came to know after reading those few chapters are that its a very great book with a lots of interesting plot..... Every moment here gonna give u a thrilling and attracting vibes.... Really liked the authors writting skills.... Loved the way author wrote the story like not too described but easy to read which readers need the most.... Very cool story l want to say....

Ink_Quanta
Ink_QuantaLv12Ink_Quanta

I like the way the story is not kinda more detailed and all that easy to read.I also notice now,that stories here normally start like,for,women rights and all that😂 Althought it matches my thought's at some point,so nice work,I guess.

milordd
milorddLv10milordd

I like the concept of this novel and after reading the first few chapters, I think the execution has been great. There could be some work on editing overall, with grammar and so on but it isn't a big deal since everything is easy to understand. I'm excited to learn more about the characters and can't wait for more chapters!

JaRi09
JaRi09Lv2JaRi09

It's a good book I really love the plot and setting .I really recommend this book, It's so amazing . The author is really doing a great job please don't skip this book. Keep up the good work author!

xhaidockska
xhaidockskaLv1xhaidockska

Honestly, overall it's good. This the first time I read a novel with a conversation using a dash (-) and not this ("), but still it's good. The story, the characters, and the creativity of the novel! Keep it up, though!

KyrieUzumaki
KyrieUzumakiLv12KyrieUzumaki

A Few chapters in an I really like the story its very unique in a way :D ✨ there is Some grammer that can be corrected but no is perfect lol. pease keep up the good work author :D❤️

lo_rezi
lo_reziLv3lo_rezi

Mesmerizing work author, am already loving the book athe book although I just read few chapters can't wait to complete it ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4RomanceFanatic028

I only read few chapters but i really enjoyed it. There were few grammatical errors in the chapters but i understand it. It happened to me too. The FML ryoko is very interesting character. I don't know much about her but she sounds brave that's why i like it. The world building is also slowly opening. I can't wait to read further. All the best author 😊