KyrieUzumaki
Just a girl that likes to draw and write stories
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This story is very inresting! It kinda reminds me of sword art online in a way based on how you was starting the stats of the book! I would say in the first chapter the paragraph was really long it’s best to break it down so it flows better ! Overall the book is really good! Keep up the good work :)
Usually I don’t read books like this but this one was really interesting! I felt like I was sort of the story and the writing it immaculate! I’m almost jealous lol 😂 I’ve only read three chapters but I’m loving the story and the character that is involved around it! Keep u the good work! Can’t wait for more :)
I’m glad she’s getting out of there, they treat her so badly and doesn’t deserve that
I love this cute story! I wish it didn’t end 😭 I hope you make more books like this! It was very enjoyable to read :)