Love your feedback and I really appreciate you taking the time to drop a review. Hope you enjoy the rest of the series. It is just getting started.

The characters are developing seamlessly and the dialogue is interesting in particular because of the way information is revealed about the world that these characters live in. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

Apologies for that inconvenience. I published the chapter 'Renown' on my laptop and the paragraphs appeared to have spacing. But after reading your review, I checked through the phone app and you were right. It was all bunched up. I've updated it. Appreciate your review.