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TLDR; The plot is nice, it's a girl power fantasy adventure, and the plot line seems to be moving in a fairly dark and dramatic direction. If you are alright with being patient in waiting for a more concrete world building outline and can overlook a certain amount of grammar issues, it's honestly worth a try for younger readers. The character descriptions are very appearance focused, which I find unfortunate, and it takes me a good couple of lines of dialogue to really sus out their personalities, other than the protagonist who is unequivocally headstrong, impulsive and stubborn in the "strong martial arts FL" kind of way. The writing quality varies quite a bit, and the formatting changes between early and later chapters (I would recommend changing the earlier ones to match the later ones, since the author seems more comfortable with it). There are also a good deal of spelling errors, but getting a decent reading experience regardless is absolutely possible, especially if one reads fast and likes a fast paced story like this one. The competition is fairly outlined, but it gets a little confusing everyone being equally casual with each other as well as the very different names, namely Japanese, Korean, some Eurocentric ones (French and English specifically, I believe), and more. The universe is a little confusing so far, but the focused plot does help with it quite a bit.

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