Review Detail of PerkyPompous_Pixie in My throne

An interesting take on Royals and competition as Ryoko takes over her brother's role. Love the twist in the third chapter. I think if the story is fleshed out a little bit, it would attract more readers. On a side note, I would advise you to proofread your work. Some errors could be fixed which may enhance the reading experience. All the best🥳