Reviews of Martial Arts System

If possible start this again this was your best work tbh

It's an interesting novel , keep up the good work

Really enjoyed this, been coming back now and again hoping you'd carry on with the story, is there any chance you'll ever carry on with this, or is it just done ?

Although very rough at the start it was great to see the authors progression as a writer and the character progression. is the story perfect? No but that's what I like about it and with how well white online was done I hope the author revisits this series even if it need a rewrite of some sort because the development of the world and characters was still very engaging. The System could be utilised a bit more however maybe that would make the MC op and I honestly think that if the author felt that then just keep it as is.

I don’t know about the novel but the comments are top tier if anything I spent most of my time reading the comments😂

Great book can’t wait for the next part hope you can find your spark again for this masterpiece

The aspects of fighting are well written, like for example from where to where the punch or kick is going or added rotation movement to strike faster or more poverful. (If u like this kind of thing in novel, u know what to do) Also the story alone is not like typical “power up the Mc novel” there are moments when u can be surprised by the plot. The world itself has some mystery, like “continent” (u will know if u read 😉) or the „power” that fill the world. Find yourself what it is or just wait like me to find a full answers😅😊

well, unhappy with the story, and then dropped out the story. I think the story was quite interesting, but well, if the author was not happy then its also pointless to continue the story.

I really enjoyed reading the book, even if the author makes many grammatical and wording errors. The world has a lot of potential and I really hope there will be a book 2!

Copying my post from ch 12: Ayo, I really tried guys but the grammar is so bad I find myself putting together the sentences in my head. Great story premise, bad construction. Also, you can’t have the MC talking about leaving no witnesses then leaving witnesses. Show us he’s the smart, hardworking, cold blooded assassin you introduced him as instead of restating it every chapter. It makes it less believable. Wanted to leave this constructive criticism before I left the novel. Keep grinding Mr. Author! My summary of thoughts of the past 12 chapters: I think its possible to do cliche isekai stories well, which is why i still read them. I really wanted so badly for this to be one of those but there are a few glaring weaknesses Character design: It is reiterated that Ichiro was a man who devoted his entire life to martial arts, and was a contracted assassin for the government. That's it, no real fleshing out of his personality, except for stereotypical "smart, cold blooded, mature MC" He also has this strange hero complex where he acknowledges he's a killer, yet when he is forced to kill for the first time in this world he for some reason denies that he's a murderer? It doesn't make sense. When introducing side characters there's a way to introduce them to make the reader care about them. I don't care about any of these characters, nor does it seem like the author does either. We spend one chapter on his new family and besides his sister, i don't remember the parents. I mean, the father was introduced at the end of his school day and he was introduced like an afterthought "Oh yeah, I met my father for the first time and he felt like my father" And then we move on with the story. The world was also introduced like an afterthought. We get introduced to the setting during his history class, and the info dump is done in run on sentences. We also get no info on the school:is this the best one in the country? Why, if the world needs more martial artists is it that instead of being a martial arts school, the discipline is relegated to an afterschool club? Is there a reason behind this or was the school designed just to satisfy the obligatory academy arc in each novel? Story Development: More of the same from world background, it all felt kind of rushed and i feel like the author could've taken his time writing out the academy, his family, giving the reader a sense of Ichiros personality, and the introduction of the 'system'. In these kinds of stories, there always ends up being a reason behind the system being given:Do other people have it? Can Ichiro ask about that? We don't even know if his classmates can use it, it seems like we're supposed to infer that they can't Writing Quality: I could've looked past the rest of these issues if the grammar was at least passable but too many run on sentences, too much reiteration, and clunky sentences. All in all, this has potential, and i'd like it to reach that to it's fullest

all I need to know its the different rank, im about 400 chaps in but I still don't know which comes before others in the higher end it would be great if it could be put in the description of the novel

i wont give this novel any rank coz when i started reading this i thought it is a finished work but it turned out to be a dumped one so it doesn't matter how good the novel is if there is no good ending.

4-5-3-1-5 Translation quality good for someone from Finland. 4 Update very good for part time job. 5 Story has great development but author need more time to think before writing story. 3 Only thing I hated about this is MC character design and for other side character quite nice. 1 World background very good because I like world focus martial art and beast like Novel or manga Global Martial Arts. 5 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Vcyufyfydtccuuvuvfuuffuyffjvjufhffhhfyfyffugjvjgjvjvjgjjgjvgjhfhfgjgjvjcjfjgjgjgjvjvjvjvjvjvjvjvjgjgjvjgkgkhkhkgkgkgkgkkgkggjgkjgjgigjgugugugugiggjgjgkhkgk

It is an awesome piece of work. Do give it a go! It has all elements which makes a reader to not leave the novel, from Action to romance , slice of life and more.

Alekzi did good with this. Unlike White Online, Martial Arts System is more action packed and emotional. I absolutely adore the way he built Ichiro and the world he lives in.

So, this is my first review. First and foremost, the first half of the chapters when it comes to writing are dull at first, then at the second half, it gets better and so on. I wish someone will create a wiki for this novel because this novel is an amazing bunch!

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Hey alekzi I was thinking are you the one who write the comics or ru translating and if yes from which book you are translating. please ignore if any grammer mistake but a big fan of your writing

....OK......so I'm on chapter 190 at the time of this review for the record and I do enjoy this book let's start with that it's done a little different than most and grammar is about 75% ish correct and story development isnt bad most of the time and I enjoy it more than dislike NOW HAVING SAID THAT the part I dont like is really annoying and one thing in particular just really reaches out and slaps me in the face and that's the way the system affects his money and you know what? I wouldnt even object if for some reason he couldn't get too much money but the way the system does it and everything that pertains too while admittedly stupid and childish or Petty of me too say cause it's really a small thing in the grand scheme of things but it's almost a deal breaker for me if the interactions between characters and the story wasnt so interesting I would have done dropped it and I can tell you with absolute certainty that I will stop reading it the minute I read 3-4 chapters together I'm not interested enough in while this money control issue is ongoing cause its definitely a unpleasant thing for me personally to read about and if the frequency of face slaps to mc continue to rise and it doesn't lead to a relatively quick conclusion then I would calmly rage quit hmm-cough** I'm just saying this for author to think about for next book or something to late now obviously