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....OK......so I'm on chapter 190 at the time of this review for the record and I do enjoy this book let's start with that it's done a little different than most and grammar is about 75% ish correct and story development isnt bad most of the time and I enjoy it more than dislike NOW HAVING SAID THAT the part I dont like is really annoying and one thing in particular just really reaches out and slaps me in the face and that's the way the system affects his money and you know what? I wouldnt even object if for some reason he couldn't get too much money but the way the system does it and everything that pertains too while admittedly stupid and childish or Petty of me too say cause it's really a small thing in the grand scheme of things but it's almost a deal breaker for me if the interactions between characters and the story wasnt so interesting I would have done dropped it and I can tell you with absolute certainty that I will stop reading it the minute I read 3-4 chapters together I'm not interested enough in while this money control issue is ongoing cause its definitely a unpleasant thing for me personally to read about and if the frequency of face slaps to mc continue to rise and it doesn't lead to a relatively quick conclusion then I would calmly rage quit hmm-cough** I'm just saying this for author to think about for next book or something to late now obviously

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