Naysay3r
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Naysay3r6mthCommentedHere's the not-so-visible plot armor guys xD
'Damn it! I have to end this fast since he's mocking me.' Adrian thought to himself, his teeth gritted in determination. He knew he had to act fast before his opponent got the upper hand.- Naysay3r1yrReplied to zveryCh -1 Author's Words
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I'm getting a "Battle through the heavens" vibes here.
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- Naysay3r1yrCommentedCh 36 The Silent War
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Ahh, thank you for giving me such example on how to show and tell! ^_^
Thick drops of sweat trickled down his back as his shirt was plastered to his skin. Exhaustion swept through his body, slowly but steadily replacing the vigor that had filled him with hope minutes ago as if a parasite would slowly suck away the life of its host. - Naysay3r1yrCommentedCh 13 Rebirth
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"Ginagago mo ba kami?!" 😂
"Hey! You're joking right?" - Naysay3r1yrCommented
I reminisced the game called Dying Light xD
-The living infected. They had the second largest population among the zombies. They are fast and agile but their only goal was to infect and as such, most of their victims turn into biters with just a bite injury. They were highly hampered by their weaknesses as a living infected. - Naysay3r1yrCommented
Ohh my bad
-Steal and devour the mana present in any living creature and the with a simple touch, converting it to EXP - Naysay3r1yrCommented
Where can he store his mana if his mana core is broken?
>>Mana steal - Naysay3r1yrCommentedWhat did cultured reader enjoy the most? Was it a deep plotline, fascinating characters, or superb worldbuilding? No silly, they liked sexy anime girls and hunks on their novel covers.
- Naysay3r1yrCommentedCh 1 The genius of a writer
- Naysay3r1yrCommentedCh 18 The Treasure Beneath
- Naysay3r1yrCommentedCh 17 Killing Blow
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Hi! Now that I'm caught up, I just wanna say a few things. The overall story is good, however, there are a lot of issues in writing quality. Sometimes I can see that you lacked some punctuations in each paragraph. Overall the novel is good, and needs a little bit of fixing. Hopefully you like my review. Cheers!
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That's so sad.
"Diamonds die when they lose their gems and their bodies disappear into nothingness, that's the price to pay to have a child. Also, you can't say for sure that she died easily. We don't know how she met her end or if she's even dead so for now, we can only theorize." - Naysay3r1yrCommented
At least she stopped being an annoying woman.
Eva rolled her eyes, "You're my master, I'm obliged to answer any questions you got."