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MalusLupus

MalusLupus

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2021-08-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • MalusLupus
    MalusLupus1yr
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    Although very rough at the start it was great to see the authors progression as a writer and the character progression. is the story perfect? No but that's what I like about it and with how well white online was done I hope the author revisits this series even if it need a rewrite of some sort because the development of the world and characters was still very engaging. The System could be utilised a bit more however maybe that would make the MC op and I honestly think that if the author felt that then just keep it as is.

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    Martial Arts System
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  • MalusLupus
    MalusLupus1yr
    Replied to Alekzi

    I hope you revisit this series at some point. although it was rough at the start I really enjoyed reading this series. White online was great and it really bumbs me out that their is no satisfactory conclusion to this story.

    altalt
    Martial Arts System
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