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Review Detail of MalusLupus in Martial Arts System

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Although very rough at the start it was great to see the authors progression as a writer and the character progression. is the story perfect? No but that's what I like about it and with how well white online was done I hope the author revisits this series even if it need a rewrite of some sort because the development of the world and characters was still very engaging. The System could be utilised a bit more however maybe that would make the MC op and I honestly think that if the author felt that then just keep it as is.

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