Reviews of Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)

An excellent novel that is very well written . I really like how the author has explored HP magic and taken it to new hights. The latest chapter which I am on has sort of ended HP Canon in a way and marvel part of the story is probably going to kick in. Excited to see just what the author has got planned for us and exactly what has Jasmine been up to for the many milliana she has been alive, hope the author sheds some light on it , maybe some filler chapters for the many lifetimes she has lived.

The best Harry Potter fanfic I’ve read, the story is so unique and interesting, I can’t wait for more. I wish the author could publish chapters more often but you can’t always get what you want….

I was not expecting this to be as good as it is. I was just planning to see if it was worth reading… and then next thing I know I finished all of it… what I’m trying to say is this was really good and I enjoyed every chapter! Keep up the good work Author!

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The author has made mc have divine powers capable of doing anything, and all she does is play a secondary character. This novel gone downhill.

There are so many POV swaps and time jumps all over the place it comes across a garbled mess sometimes. And then there are time where you get almost a whole Arc without the MC in it. It comes across more of a writing experiment then a story ment for someone to actual read

Generally just poorly written, I felt like I was pulling my tooth while attempting to read, it may get better in later chapters, however after finally reading 12 chapters I had to give up.

I am writing this review because I felt like it. At first I thought it was some kind of garbage, but later, when I started reading further, I really got carried away and could not stop reading this wonderful fanfic. Since I am not very familiar with Harry Potter, but this did not stop me from reading all the chapters that are currently available. Many thanks to the author for his work

5/5

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I have to admit, this is probably the best HP Fanfic out there. The story is immersive and imaginary, It constantly draws in the reader to want to read more. It delves into the myth and legends of the world it is set in, builds upon it, and literally creates a new world of magic that brings a breath of fresh air to the franchise. It isn't like 99.9% of the HP fanfics that plague this website with it's repetitiveness, which literally just follows canon and bring no originality to it. I mean, If I wanted to read canon, I'd read the original books not some FF's that has slight changes. :S Whereas this FF does, and has tonnes of that original juice. Now lastly, the reason why this is just 1 star away from a perfect 5 star ovrl rating from me is, that the stability of update is a little finicky, I kind of wish it was better, as it's very addictive to read.. (C'mon I can be petty ok??, It's my review/opinion, what can you do?) ^^ If you ignore that, then yes total 5stars all around.. WQ - 5 SOF - 4 (5) SD - 5 CD - 5 WB - 5

The story was quite nice actually, love the character Morgan evershade but aren't you in quite hurry to cover the story Morgan stay in Atlantis arc was not justified same to jasmine childhood or Morgan stay in the orphanage. You could actually divide the story in volumes or arc with each having 30 to 40 Ch . Please can you instead of writing in paragraph you could write more dialogues to make the story more lively. And yeah can you please improve the update stability I was actually waiting for u to update for more than a week and actually thought that u have dropped the story.

First of all I wasnt expecting the majority of the twists that have happened so far but i greatly enjoyed them. Also because the only other fics i could find written the way you chose to do are Basilisk-Born and A Long Journey Home I’m on the edge of my seat (bed) for the new chapter. You’re also commiting to more because of the marvel universe so i wish you luck in your thought process and writing! Really looking forward to the rest of your story, I wish you health and happiness :D

i just finished this story and all i have to say is that it was an incredible experience. It is so rare to have a good ending like this even more so for a fanfic i can just say good job author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Every chapter I read makes me want to break the screen........................................................................................................

We dont have enough female SI out there, yuri is a plus, at 300+ chapters, still updating, good premise... the frick you waiting for, go read!

I'm gonna put this review here, simple because it's a great novel that I won't be able to enjoy due to the fact that I cant enjoy FL MC's (I truly hope that with the passage of time I can and it that happens I will come back xD) and I think that it deserves a review seeing I won't be suporting the author in his chapter updates The novel is great, the writing style os dome right with proper beggining, midle and ends to the sentences and the way the caracthers personalities are shown and the world background os descriped its simple awesome I hope u will give this novel a try

terribly written story MC by chapter 7 is not even 10 years self taught pretty much master mind reader multimillionaire learned multiple martial arts learned and mastered more than dozen a dozen languages built an a.i the only reason the story one punch man is any good is the comedy if you take that it it becomes bland like this

When I first read the title and the first few chapters, I thought this was gonna be one of those clusterfck novels where worlds and powers are mixed in the most confusing ways. Don't get me wrong, it is confusing in some aspects, but as the story progresses it becomes quite entertaining. The mixing of worlds is done quite well too compared to others. The love interest of the Mc lacks character development. I don't know much about her and she isn't explained much, also their romance feels meh. It's lacking in the explanation/storytelling department. Overall, it's a fun read. Not one of those stories I take seriously, but a good one otherwise.