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The story was quite nice actually, love the character Morgan evershade but aren't you in quite hurry to cover the story Morgan stay in Atlantis arc was not justified same to jasmine childhood or Morgan stay in the orphanage. You could actually divide the story in volumes or arc with each having 30 to 40 Ch . Please can you instead of writing in paragraph you could write more dialogues to make the story more lively. And yeah can you please improve the update stability I was actually waiting for u to update for more than a week and actually thought that u have dropped the story.
Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
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Yeah I get that. It's just that I'm not used to write dialogue really. English is my third language and the only things I write in English usually are project documentations and essays (I'm studying Computer Science at uni) which do not have any dialogue. This is mostly to practice and honestly I've been reading fanfics for years and I just decided to write this and I like the story. Honestly, when I'm done, I would like for someone to rewrite this story properly. I have a lot of great ideas, it's the execution that I don't like. I know my plot is solid but writing dialogue is a lot harder than I thought.