webnovel
0
DaoistYLNQoY

DaoistYLNQoY

Lv1
2022-05-14 JoinedGlobal
-h

of reading

352

Read books

Moments

2
  • DaoistYLNQoY
    DaoistYLNQoY1yr
    Posted

    Some of the dialogue is weirdly written. There are plot holes laying around, e.g. the police officer not carrying a gun (really, the gun and trigger happy USA not carrying a gun?). A single person somehow taking on 7 people alone successfully? Other than that, the grammar is decent, the flow of the story is okay.

    Gangster System: I Will Become The Greatest Gangster!
    Urban · TheSystemWriter
    detail
  • DaoistYLNQoY
    DaoistYLNQoY1yr
    Posted

    Generally just poorly written, I felt like I was pulling my tooth while attempting to read, it may get better in later chapters, however after finally reading 12 chapters I had to give up.

    Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
    Book&Literature · athass_prkr
    detail