mc should really think about safeguarding his blood.. I mean, he's an immortal elf, his blood is incredibly precious and dangerous...
ikr, is another wholesome harry potter fic too much to ask for? this was going well, but now mc has turned into a blood sack to be drained..
yeah, this is too much.. not to mention, I'm here for the pure slice of life.. probs the majority of your readers too.. MC being drained and becoming a resource for his blood was not in the description or tags.. maybe put a fatal curse in his blood like how unicorn blood is.. instead of giving luck, make it act like a fatal dose malaclaw venom..
author, can we please stop going back and forth on the timeline.. too many flash backs, it's getting annoying
so, Sullivan is betrothed to the daughter of the oblivion ?
why did he even put it there....????
let's hope he doesn't make it a habit and turns into a weird chimera abomination..
that wasn't really training.. it's more like a bragging session.....
Latin* as the potter family are decedents of the romans
he's a gigolo(men) not a prostitute(women)...
also, mc should take that "dream" seriously.. and do a ritual to make his blood useless outside his body..
there was no need for the ending author.. this is a slice of life, meant to be light hearted.. not a horror..
half angel half devil*... not demon.. he is a Morningstar, and his father is the Devil and the first Archangel..
the fk is he still doing there..
like i said in my past comment, a horcrux isn't exactly efficient, but both practically follow the same concept.. I'm not talking about which is superior or not, or which you'd rather do.. I'm am stating a fact, a statement, that both essentially do the same thing.. which is the storage of a soul or soul fragments in an object.. what is so hard to understand about this? do you not understand the queens English? (fyi both Sauron and Voldemort, they were both nutjobs.)
umu he should switch off his force skills in the one piece world.. hes going to probs kill a lot of people as most are the unreasonable sort.. no need to wait for someone that can blow up islands to injure him 3 times... that's the height of stupidity..
he should turn off his access to the force and truly train his body.. instead of using the force as a crutch...
he's too over reliant on the force doing everything for him.. the force doesn't improve his body.. it's a borrowed power.. the speed he gets with the force isn't his speed.. heck those in the pirate world, can move as fast as him, maybe even more with their base strength.. whilst mc fiddles around with the force and never improves his base str...