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uh.. he has clairvoyance ...???????
I'm pretty sure he can use his clairvoyance to find out everything about the world .. so visiting a library is just pointless
why does he keep saying that? he is also a creation god, with domains of life and order.. and I'm pretty sure Yin represents chaos not Yang.. He is just being edgy now..
An enjoyable read if you've got nothing to read.. there are plenty of spelling mistakes, though it's not too bad. Story development is decent but it gets a little confusing if you don't know certain plotlines; eg, I've never read Martial asura god and the one with the 33 heavens too.. yeah, I had no idea what was going on in those.. MC in this fanfic talks about how trashy and boring those stories are, but then goes to those worlds.. I mean, let's be real.. if it's a trashy manhua/manhwa?, then we the readers of this fanfic most likely didn't read it because it's.. well, trashy.. so yeah, basically it gets confusing in those arcs as we know nothing about it, and the world building isn't too great to bring us up to speed.. Lastly, it's a harem fic that is dual cultivation oriented, but there are no lemons or lewds.. it's like getting the cake but not eating it, and all you are left with is disappointment.. Finally, to conclude this review;.. it is not a bad read, but it could be so much better..
*sighh* sperm eyes...
why doesn't he borrow the mirror of samsara to just learn it.. instead of changing his dragon eyes to the swiggly ones
what's the point of this though???
hmm.. you're right..
I'm pretty sure he'll be consuming her soul as well though? so how is she going to resurrect without a soul.. ?
yeah.. but mc is not a jjs, not really anyway.. he reincarnated from a normal world without jjs and only gained those powers in his new life, so he should have a good idea on what's chuuni/edgy and what is not.. it's like those typical isekai protags, where they all wear a standard black trench coat with fur collars and use black katanas.. it's bog standard how to be a edgelord 101
fuck'em author.. fuck'em all.. this fanfic is great, so keep it up!
MC has no personality whatsoever. he's just trying to mimic bone daddy ainz with his actions even though his emotions are not suppressed... mc wants to dominate the world, just for the sake of dominating something.. it's basically irrational.. When Ainz did it, he was constantly at war with himself with his emotions constantly getting suppressed and his negative karma and alignment pushing him to do things his human self would recoil at, where lives are just a number.. mc in this fanfic doesn't have that excuse..
kinda pretentious and chuuni tbh.. but hey it's your story author..
is mc going to gradually become more psycho ?
so.. basically interfere in the business of others.. rather than minding his own business.. can he ignore the last mission, because it sounds like a drag.. he can deal with trihexa and exe alone..
the start of this fic was nice, it was light hearted, somewhat goofy and a slice of life.. but then I feel like this story lost it's soul, when it changed from a slice of life and somewhat comedy to dealing with assassins, world building, conquest and now politics.. it's trying to be too much all at once.. mc should just focus on one aspect and stick to it.. like she's a genius inventor/hacker, entrepreneur, singer and bookwriter.. she's literally swimming in cash without any want and need for anything.. but then she goes and gets involved with assassins, kills a bunch of people, starts conquering and then goes into politics for just the shits and giggles, for no reason at all but because she can do it.. it's like trying to put together a 10,000 piece puzzle but then some random asshole comes along and mixes other random puzzle pieces into your pile.. so yeah, I'm dropping this..
yeah.. a person could do 20 push ups in 1 minute on average.. so 20x60minutes = 1200 push-ups that he could have done because he won't feel tired or muscle pain.. instead mc was content with just a 100 push ups and sprinting -.-..
nah dude.. this isn't a xianxia