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I Fell For Him Accidently

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SEP1A
SEP1ALv10SEP1A

This book was the break my mind needed for the past year and a half. As I read your work, the genuineness in your descriptions and the images that were projected in my mind as you strung me along were like that first sip of lemonade on a hot day. Thank you for writing this story. There were some minor errors but these should be eradicated as you read more and self-growth occurs; a natural process which you shouldn't worry about. The transition from description to character-driven action as the story went along was marvelous - the cherry on top of the well baked cake. You've got something that I cannot wait to see flourish!

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Vienna_Gu
Vienna_GuLv2Vienna_Gu

Layla is perfect girl, i am falling in love with Layla [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] good character and nice story Author👍👍👍 Regards from Vienna Gu author of Princess Azalea

J_Writing
J_WritingLv11J_Writing

This story honestly reminds me of my first love back in High school which is a great thing! You get a lot of those sweet butterfly moments mixed with that "hotness overload" which I am all about. There are a few typos and some placement of asterisk description that can be written out but the writing is still cohesive. All-in-all my dear author, you are heading on a pretty stellar start. Don't stop. Tell your story!

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Few chaps and I can smell great inspiration and creativity. Sometimes there are typos but it was okay. So continue to write, they say practice makes perfect. Cool and captivating novel, got some goosebumps here. Hehe peace ✌️

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

The novel is great, and I had fun reading it! It was very engaging despite reading the first few chapters of the novel. I posted all of my comments and things that i think might need editting, but besides that, I think this novel is going to be amazing!

Lucid_dreamss
Lucid_dreamssLv2Lucid_dreamss

The flow of the story is very calming to read. A well-written story about high school and first love where the main character Layla leaves you wanting to read on to see her success even further. It was my first time reading and I really enjoyed the start of the story and will like to see how far ML and FL go...I also love that the characters have distinctive voices. The writing style is new to me but it was still captivating. As the story continues, the more I was able to understand and be drawn in with the plot. Well done author.

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ElaryWakefield
ElaryWakefieldLv11ElaryWakefield

Super cute! I love all the details that are used in this novel! This poor MC. I won't give spoilers but it is sad! I can not wait to read more! Keep up the great work!!

Raksha1
Raksha1Lv12Raksha1

After just several chapters this story managed to hook me up and make me so curious to find out what happens next 😍 The language is very nice and flowy, it reveals just enough information without seeming clogged or heavy, and the characters are so well fleshed out. From just a few chapters you can get a sense of their personality which is great! The author really did an amazing job with setting the beginning of the story. I will definitely continue reading this story and recommend it to others as well! Keep up the good work author! 🥰

bella_melodia
bella_melodiaLv4bella_melodia

The synopsis gives you a glimpse of the content inside the book. The content inside has been designed beautifully and in a well-arranged way. The words make you think like playing a movie. I would love to read more.

JohnDoer
JohnDoerLv5JohnDoer

The beginning is interesting and intriguing, making you want more. The story is interesting and it flows steadily and naturally. Nice pacingGood Work author! Keep it up!

MyCatPaws
MyCatPawsLv3MyCatPaws

It's a story that would remind you of young love and crushes during High School. That young naïve love lol anyways... the story was extremely well written, the character developments were slowly progressing into the character that the author wans to portray to us. I don't have any complains when it comes to the world building... there's still a lot to anticipate to this story so I'll definitely cheer for you author-nim!

Dvanzy6
Dvanzy6Lv2Dvanzy6

I read the initial chapter and what a brilliant plot this is ☺️ The first part already captured my interest and I'm already looking forward to how the story would unfold. Added to my library. I highly recommend ♥️☺️

Venusean
VenuseanLv2Venusean

As of the latest release, my biggest praise for this book is how the author improved their writing style. While some very small issues that I have pointed out in comments remain, the chapters are much more flowy and smooth to read through in the latest updates. I don't usually read the contemporary romance genre and it might not be my cup of tea, but this was a pleasant read and will remain in my library. I'm looking forward to seeing more interaction between the FL and ML and how your writing quality is taken up a notch further. Keep up the good work~~

gaijsnsn
gaijsnsnLv2gaijsnsn

I am writing this review a little early because I promised a review way back but I been so busy. From what I've read this books sounds very interesting, and I love how calming the chapters are. I can just sit, and read while drinking a cup of coffee, which is a plus for me! I really like the way the author set up the characters. they all are very interesting even from the start. I can't wait to see where this goes.

PGODofficial
PGODofficialLv2PGODofficial

Only at ch.4 for now but the plot has some interesting elements Beautiful writing and characters. Though, the starting paragraph could use some work as it fails to grab the attention of the readers.

Saviour_Ibok_9332
Saviour_Ibok_9332Lv2Saviour_Ibok_9332

A promising plot archetype, I must say. However, there are a few issues you should pay attention to. Characters are a bit unreal and have no clear motivation. The characters are stiff without a voice of their own. The series of events are really unnecessary to plot development and could have been cut out. Grammar is a main issues and the switch from present and past tenses can pull readers out of the story. POV isn't clearly established. Another point is setting. It is very vague and unclear. Best wishes and keep writing!

_Rain
_RainLv11_Rain

This book is amazing! I could vividly imagine the scenes and the conversation happening in my head. I love the plot and a little bit editing would improve the story a lot ( maybe later when you get free time). You are definitely on a roll! Good luck, author!

star_dreamer
star_dreamerLv3star_dreamer

Gosh! This is such a great story! Anyone who likes a good campus romance do try this story! The writing is good, easy to understand and the plot flow is smooth. All the characters are very interesting. Layla is so strangely nice. Well-done author. Will certainly continue with this story.

Gabriel_Hill4Real
Gabriel_Hill4RealLv1Gabriel_Hill4Real

An amazing novel. I do admit, I was confused at the beginning, but as I went on, I started understanding more and more. There are a bunch of typographical errors, but I think the plot of this story makes it hardly noticeable