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I have read around 10 chaps. This review is based on them. Alright, so this is a simple story about Layla, the school's vice president, her friends, and the new students, one being the potential love interest. The characters are well written, and so are the dialogues. Just writer told many times, instead of showing. But this thing needs a lot of practise so it's alright. Story development is slow-paced but it is done well. As for the writing quality, it is good but there were mistakes here and there. Proofreading once can easily fix this. Overall, it was an interesting read. If you are looking for a light-hearted, school-based story then this one is for you. And, good luck, Author.

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I Fell For Him Accidently

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Thank you for the review ☺️