This book was the break my mind needed for the past year and a half. As I read your work, the genuineness in your descriptions and the images that were projected in my mind as you strung me along were like that first sip of lemonade on a hot day. Thank you for writing this story. There were some minor errors but these should be eradicated as you read more and self-growth occurs; a natural process which you shouldn't worry about. The transition from description to character-driven action as the story went along was marvelous - the cherry on top of the well baked cake. You've got something that I cannot wait to see flourish!
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LIKECrown_of_Flame:Thank you for your review. It was very lovely and encouraging. I absolutely agree with you self growth is a natural process; thus I and my characters will definitely grow in the right direction. Your review is really like a candy that leaves a sweet taste in the mouth.