Review Detail of J_Writing in I Fell For Him Accidently

This story honestly reminds me of my first love back in High school which is a great thing! You get a lot of those sweet butterfly moments mixed with that "hotness overload" which I am all about. There are a few typos and some placement of asterisk description that can be written out but the writing is still cohesive. All-in-all my dear author, you are heading on a pretty stellar start. Don't stop. Tell your story!