Review Detail of Saviour_Ibok_9332 in I Fell For Him Accidently

A promising plot archetype, I must say. However, there are a few issues you should pay attention to. Characters are a bit unreal and have no clear motivation. The characters are stiff without a voice of their own. The series of events are really unnecessary to plot development and could have been cut out. Grammar is a main issues and the switch from present and past tenses can pull readers out of the story. POV isn't clearly established. Another point is setting. It is very vague and unclear. Best wishes and keep writing!