Where do I even start? I love this! And I'm in love with your grammar and use of words. It's impeccable and allowed for an easy read. I loved the emotional turmoil of the characters, their miscommunication, and the mental trauma and grief they're going through. Jenny reminded me of myself a bit. Please keep updating, I would like to see how everything comes together!
What can I say... THIS NOVEL IS FANTASTIC. For the time I have read novels this is the first novel that's actually targeting human struggles... The story line at the moment is ✨chefs kiss✨ it's amazing. Currently read it through, wanted to see a few chaps but ended up reading half of it haha!. The Grammer is amazing tbh the writing style is perfect and easy to understand:) and easy to feel the characters emotions. Tbh I can't wait to get to the sweet parts of this novelll I will seriously read this whole thing after I get free and timee. I can't wait to see this author shine with their work!! Good luck!! Thx for ur tiem dear author-shii -Author-nim<3
I started reading thinking it would be the usual romance story but hey, it was way better than what I had expected. the ML and FL didn’t felt cliche to me, i’m attracted to find out more about their pasts and secrets. I enjoyed the writing style and descriptions too (some of them are very cute, especially how the two of them met as kids). I’m anticipating there might be some heartbreaking moments or twists as the story progresses? Not sure what the writer has planned for us yet but I believe it will be something great :)
It's got potential, for sure. The writing's got room for improvement, but the errors in grammar and composition that ARE present don't detract too much from the content itself. The plotline seems in line with various K-dramas I've caught wind of over the years, which does say something about the author's interests which may be influencing her writing. Keep working on your writing, and you'll go far.
This is a great teen novel. The writing style is easy to understand. the story was fast-paced. Nonetheless, the character design and world BG were great. I'm waiting for the next update eagerly. Everything about it was perfect but there was this one thing that, I didn't feel any cliffhangers. The writer should take this in her concern. I rate this story a 4.8/5.0 I highly recommend this story. Give it a try. It's really good.
I don't really know what to say, the book left me speechless, I'm in love with this book like wow author, everything is well planned, they way you write makes me believe like it is not a fictional story but life story, I can even see the picture of the characters in the story great work author, this book deserves more than 5 stars