Khaluchi_8941
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Khaluchi_89413mthCommentedCh 2 The Move.- Khaluchi_89414mthCommentedCh 1 Announcement!
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Chai. 馃槶
"I needed you too." - Khaluchi_89415mthCommented
Sis!!!! Badasa!
"No. Let them go back to their master and come back to die another day." - Khaluchi_89417mthReplied to Amarachi_OsonduCh 145 The end
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What is this nau?!!! Let's have one happy moment? ONE!!! PLEASE!!!!
But he didn't need to say anything because at that moment, the doors to the Clavicle burst open, and armed men dressed head-to-toe in black trooped in, headed by none other than the infamous brother slayer, Prince Caius. - Khaluchi_89417mthCommented
My boy is in love 馃槀馃槀馃槀 He doesn't know about itttt
He had watched Aithne transform into a...demon of some sort. A fire breathing demon. And yet here she was today, as devastatingly beautiful as ever even while she grieved. And she seemed perfectly normal. Well, maybe not normal. More like some ethereal, other-worldly, perfectly made, divine creature that knocked the breaths from his lungs with every mere glance. But still human nonetheless. - Khaluchi_89417mthCommented
Is it weird that I got shivers from this paragraph? 馃槄
Her agony was consuming, ragged, enraged. And she had willingly succumbed to its dominion. She let its darkened tongue lick its way across her skin, leaving blisters that strived to match the bleeding in her heart but would never even hold a candle to it. She let the scorching fingers of her pain wrap itself around her body in a welcoming embrace, and the flames in her heart burned ever so brighter. - Khaluchi_89417mthCommented
He can't undo what has already been done, unfortunately 馃槶
"Forgive me, my child. Forgive me." His poisoned聽 lips were whispering to her, his eyes blank and unseeing, clogged with the guilt of all the pain he had caused her. - Khaluchi_89419mthReplied to FallencyCh 2 Not quite a discontinuation
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From an objective POV, the plot is engaging ,the characters are fleshed out and interesting. The female lead is a great femme Fatale and her back story is sad and makes you understand why she is the way she is. There were some spelling mistakes but none that takes away the beauty of the story telling. I wish you would space out the words and create more paragraphs for a smoother read. Subjectively, it's not the type of book I like to read but I would definitely recommend this to anyone who favors this genre. Keep it up, author.
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- Khaluchi_894110mthCommentedCh 1 A still-birth
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馃槩馃槩馃槩
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Ughhhhh.. This reminds me of Joffrey's death... But I'm not happy like I was then... I'm much more sad about the effect King Rey's death will have on both Aithne and Katherine
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Thank goodness he knows he doesn't deserve their forgiveness
"I'm not going to ask for your forgiveness because I know that I don't deserve it. Death isn't enough to absolve me of my sins or to earn your forgiveness. I just...I'm sorry." A tear rolled down the King's cheek and he reached a hand toward Aithne who simply stared at it for several moments before finally reaching out to take it. - Khaluchi_894110mthCommented
Awww, 馃槶馃槶
"You're probably the best person I know and I'm not just saying this because you're my twin. You have such a good heart that I sometimes wonder if you're real or if you're just being performative. But I know that's just who you are. You've been like this ever since we were kids. You're the nice sister, Aithne. I'm the stubborn and cold-hearted one and you're the nice one. You care so deeply about people even if it isn't reciprocated. You inspire me, Aithne. You inspire me to be better."