I like how the story's going smoothly because of the way you write it. The flow is smooth, the events overlaps perfectly, the description of sensitive topics are well-written, and the characters' personalities are shown well despite not using flowery words. Keep it up! You're doing great!

The story's great! In just a few chapters, I can tell that the upcoming chapters are going to be good. The characters are interesting, makes me wanna interview them. Keep it up!

I like the pace of the story. It's very refreshing to read a story like this. Keep it up! Bonus: As a sucker for curse words, I was laughing whenever a character snapped! Gosh, they are so funny.

Your writing style is similar to those well-known fantasy novels and has their own comic adaptation, which I like. Also what makes it refreshing is the way you narrate. Overall, I like your writing style, it's good. The characters, they are intriguing. I know you were inspired by various stories to make the characters but what makes them slightly different is because of your plot. Instead of them giving what common characters should, I'm curios if the story's setting will affect their growth throughout the next chapters. Maybe I'm looking deeply but given that the setting gives me an eerie feeling, I'm torn whether if the supporting characters will remain as they are or they'll change.