Haha, it’s a teaser 🤷‍♀️

My spelling errors 😭 sincerely sorry, I tend to forget to review my work before submitting

I love, love, LOVE how the first three chapters went. This book isnsimilar tonsome comics thus, die to lack of imagery, the author does and EXCEPTIONAL job at description. I really enjoyed reading the first three chapter with the pinch of hunor the author added in. Definitely recommend!! Excited to see what else the author has in store for us readers! Cheering you on from this side of the screen! 🥳👏👏

LOVE IT! Before I say anything I’m just going to give the author a round of applause! Personally the grammar is perf making everything easy to both read and understand. I love the details too. would DEFINITELY recommend to anyone. Hopefully this wins WSA awards! Author, you have my support (^_−)−☆

There are quite a bit of repetition and run on sentences. I think there could be more of a hook to pull me into the story. Overall this is a really good story. Expecting this story to become a hit soon! Keep going, you got this <3!

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Thank you!

I feel like there could be a little more background on the kingdom that she is living in. For example, where and when (like what century) this is all taking place in, because while you can guess it is probably in medieval, but The author could build more on it. I also think that there were some grammar issues (not major so just mentioning it). Overall it has a really good plot though and is definitely going to be a recommendation to new readers.

Thank you so much <3

Updated ^^ Thanks for the advice!

I really like how the plot goes and how the interacts are shown. I was just sucked into the book from the nice description! Definitely recommend reading!

bro wait, but if "Rose's" mum is the actual mate of the Alpha, but then her mum was ... and had her doesn't that mean the "Rose's" mum was still w the Alpha when she was ... and that "Rose" is basically Christian's and Apollo's half sister???? Doesn't that also mean the Christian is younger than "Rose"? bc the SECOND luna is Christian's mother and so the first Luna must have been older , so that means "Rose" must have been born frst, and basically Christian's mate is prob "Rose" aka his half-sis????

Bro but like y u hittin the maids they aint do nothin wrong abd maids u know ur gonna fet hurt y listen???