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Henrietta_Otu

Henrietta_Otu

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2020-06-17 JoinedGhana
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    When love calls馃槂

    Dressed inconspicuously, Alexander blended into the crowd, his eyes always finding Mabel amidst the bustling stalls. He didn't care if he looked like a stalker; the thrill of observing her genuine joy and laughter outweighed any concern for propriety.
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    Grenville: Mabel & The Duke
    UrbanHerlove
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    I'm hooked

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Grenville: Mabel & The Duke
    UrbanHerlove
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Posted

    I was hooked from the first chapter. The characters are relating and the writing is top notch. kudos author. Looking forward for more

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    Dark Age: Rise Of The Blood Warlock
    FantasyToppy_GF
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Posted

    Intriguing and interesting plotline. A good read so far. The only thing I didn't like was the long paragraphs but that didn't take away the beauty of this novel. Thumps up author

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    The Cursed Prince "by line"
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    This paragraph is too long. Breaking them into smaller paragraphs will make reading easier.

    The sound of the screeching door cut into the music. Ignoring it, I continue playing. Assuming, it's just a servant. But then between the strings of the harp, I see a pale orange dress walk into view. I look up seeing the face of my little sister Zora, her crimped hair pinned behind her head and her big lips in a grinning smile. I know that smile, it's the one she has when she is up to trouble. I stop playing so I can concentrate on what she has to say. "Why did you stop? it sounded beautiful" she asks. The moment I stopped playing, the voices return to whisper in my ear. And the thought of strangling my sister with the strings of the harp plagues my mind. "I assume there was a reason my darling little sister came here, and It would be rude not to stop so I could hear what you have to say," I reply to her question. "I am bored out of my mind, we need to do something." Zora declares."If you are bored go read a book" I suggest even though I know she won't accept that idea. "No, I wanna do something exciting I wanna sneak down to the market."
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    The Cursed Prince "by line"
    Fantasyline123462
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Posted

    I'm intrigued, writing is top notch. I got hooked from the prolong. Kudos

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    The Power of Betrayal and Love: Echoes of Retribution
    Realisticbluesea115
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Posted

    Amazing and well-written but more interaction between the characters will make it awesome.

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    entangled identity
    Teenchilakajane72
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Posted

    Such fascinating and intriguing characters and scenes. I am hooked. Every chapter is a page-turner and I am down for it. Kudos author.

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    LYCAN KING'S REVENGEFUL BRIDE
    FantasyJane_Muse02
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    Loving it so far

    Ch 1 It Can't Be
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    LYCAN KING'S REVENGEFUL BRIDE
    FantasyJane_Muse02
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    Just the father-daughter duo

    "You look great." My father confirmed, when he came in minutes later to check up on me.
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    LYCAN KING'S REVENGEFUL BRIDE
    FantasyJane_Muse02
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    Definitely

    "Oh my lady, you have the most perfect body and no one would dare deny that," Hearing what my handmaid just said, I smiled. If I am going to win this war, then I needed a smile, a very captivating one.
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    LYCAN KING'S REVENGEFUL BRIDE
    FantasyJane_Muse02
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    馃槀馃槀seriously?

    My father wants so much to be called the king's in-law that he even sought out the witches to cast a love spell on me. Just that they had refused, saying that the prince himself was half wizard.
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    LYCAN KING'S REVENGEFUL BRIDE
    FantasyJane_Muse02
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Posted

    The writing is top notch and the prolong alone is a page-turner. The characters are engaging and the scenes are thrilling. Keep up the good work

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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    Hooked

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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Posted

    Just a few chapters in but I鈥檓 hooked. Every chapter is a page-turner and I鈥檓 curious to know more about their magics. I鈥檓 already in love with Evelyn

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    The Witching Hours
    FantasySarah_Couse
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Posted

    I鈥檓 hooked. Such an interesting and engaging piece. This novel has the potential. I'm already in love with the characters. Kudos author

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    Still, Will and Always
    LGBT+Dylan_Chaiyo
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    馃挒馃挄馃グ

    Gazing into his eyes, I found myself lost in a world of our own. His eyes were a window to a paradise, a perfect haven where we could exist, just the two of us.
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    Still, Will and Always
    LGBT+Dylan_Chaiyo
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    Great start

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 : it was him!
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    Still, Will and Always
    LGBT+Dylan_Chaiyo
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    Someone is in love

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    Still, Will and Always
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  • Henrietta_Otu
    Henrietta_Otu1mth
    Commented

    Yes

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    Still, Will and Always
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