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HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]

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What is HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]

Read HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED] fanfiction written by the author BoOk_LoV3r_429 on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Book&Literature fanfic stories, covering reincarnation, system, magic, academy, harrypotter. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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THIS NOVEL IS FROM MTL. I AM NOW USING THE ORIGINAL NOVEL AS THE FRAMEWORK FOR THIS. The plot events remain unchanged, but I am revising and enhancing the narrative for better flow and readability. I will also remove any references related to patriotism and geopolitics. This story is very slow paced, so be warned. Please feel free to point out any spelling, grammar, or plot errors in the comments below. I'll make efforts to rectify them promptly. It's important to note that I do not own the rights to Harry Potter or the original novel. Chapter Updates: Expect new chapters approximately 1-3 times a week.

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erhemee1003
erhemee1003Lv4erhemee1003

IT'S COOL AND ALL BUT WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING IN YOUR SYNOPSIS?

OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15OukisLips

Thanks for this. This translation is much better than that other translation that was posted on this app previously, and I like how you edited out all that unnecessarily controversial stuff

BoOk_LoV3r_429
BoOk_LoV3r_429AuthorBoOk_LoV3r_429

Hello, It's the editor here. I am here just to reiterate that this isn't my novel. I'm just editing and translating this form its RAW. I'm doing this because I enjoyed the original story but got fed up with how bad the grammar was. I'm doing this for fun so please don't hate on me.

Horlasunkanmi
HorlasunkanmiLv14Horlasunkanmi

I don't know how and why this devolved into a racism issue, although most Chinese authors are racist, especially towards Japanese, Korean and African American races. I just quit the novel once I notice that type of stuff, you can do that too, so instead of arguing about who is the racist or not just quit the novel.

DaoistZlQoLq
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yato_med
yato_medLv1yato_med

The novel is so boring and slow that you can skip five chapters and you won't feel any difference, and for the story it doesn't exist, Just Mac and my friends talk to each other during daily activities.

Erick200
Erick200Lv4Erick200

Extremely slow and full of chapters with no real importance, but despite that, I consider it a good story (Google translator) ———468——— ...............................................

Alax_Gecko
Alax_GeckoLv4Alax_Gecko

Bro, how do you handle the stress since I am doing the same as you? Man, to translate and research, and edit the points during storytelling and dialogue. Can you give me some advice on this gruesome journey known as MTL Madness? Love your story btw. May The Gods of Writing and The Gods of Editing bless you...

Severn877
Severn877Lv15Severn877

Really liking this story! The slice of life approach is very nice too, several other stories already have the MC not needing hogwarts early on but the pacing of this book seems more realistic.

Quadrelm
QuadrelmLv4Quadrelm

It a very good novel. One of best translation in English with a good flow. I would like author to increase the frequency of chapter updates

Mark_Baitinger
Mark_BaitingerLv14Mark_Baitinger

Good read, thank you 👍 The story development is slow.

Rizki_Caturianto
Rizki_CaturiantoLv1Rizki_Caturianto

Reveal spoiler

EroSpatula
EroSpatulaLv4EroSpatula

A pretty impressive amount of thought was put into this work. Normally, I like a bit more action in my stories but this is a refereshing change of pace. For those who tl;dr: Slice of Life in Harry Potter. The MC is the Twin Weasley age so Potter joins when the MC will be at his 3rd Year (which may possibly lead to him talking the place of Cedric Diggory.) Unlike other fanfic out there, the MC is a Gryffindor with lots of Ravenclaw traits, someone like Hermionie/Percy except less know-it-all and less stuck up. It’s been a little more over than a 100 chaps since the writing of this review (107) and boy is it hella slow, like hella slow that probably voldermort over there can resurrect himself 7 times over before the Author reaches writing the MC’s book experience in his 7th year of Hogwarts. And yes, there are info dumps on some, I would say, uncessecary information that plays a very small role in the scale of things. Info dumping was also unfortunately a thing but was removed in the later chapters and placed at the end of each chapter if you want to have a more in-depth dive on how the Author fleshed out the Harry Potter series. Also I would like to say, things that are meant to be important seem to pop up ever to when the plot is important, for example, the MC finally finds a horcrux in the form of the diadem and was enchanted by it and almost wore it until he heard the sound pings of the system going off. Yeah, he had a system, but I felt unimportant when it’s one of the key reasons he could catch up in Hogwarts. It seemed that I talked a lot of smack about this book but I actually think it’s a really good one. You can see the life of a Hogwarts student without an immortal bald man trying to kill a student every year, no phantom book unleashing a giant monster to kill students, no deranged criminal trying to kill a rat and etc. It’s very normal, and I like it that way. The side characters are super fleshed out and feels like actual people, they sometimes have their own feature chapters which I loved the Twins escape through the halls chapters. And just overall increase in quality of work as a kind of Slice of Life genre before the hectic 7 years of the chosen one

Santiago_Valencia
Santiago_ValenciaLv4Santiago_Valencia

good translation and the story itself is interesting the pacing feels very slow and it can get boring to read at times but for the most part it's a good story also hands down the bast translation I have found sentences are structured properly and other then a few spots here and there that are wrong it doesn't feel like a translation

lamortnoir974
lamortnoir974Lv3lamortnoir974

a banal harry potter fanfic with an empty character, the only thing that can be said is the relationship/dynamism between the MC's parents and him. I'm at the chapter 41

hero4hire
hero4hireLv11hero4hire

Author somebody already translated this novel with another name i just cant remember the name rn. Appreciate your effort but you shouldnt waste your time with this since its already being done.

Lizrock
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The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4The_man_The_myth

Boku no pico is a masterpiece of the anime industry which didn't receive the fame it deserved. Just check out its rating and popularity on MAL Some people just don't know how to appreciate a masterpiece (these are the same people who rate AOT 1/10) This anime started of as childish and generic but soon it takes a turn to the Bnp we all know and love today The plot twists in this anime are so unexpected that you will be amazed. For example - Who would have known that this girlish character is actually a boy (trap level 1000). I love how the plot is simple but the author brings out the best out of it. You will find nearly zero plot holes and the animation is top notch. Bones, Ufotable and even studios like mad house can't do such top notch animation like how Natural High did it. They put their whole effort and heart in animating this masterpiece and I am amazed by how they did such a good job. Like take this scene for example (sorry if the quality is bad but this is all I could find) Just see how smoothly it is animated and how natural it looks. (This animation is still better than seven deadly sins season 3) Here's a little fun fact The power system (kids should skip reading this part) This anime has such a unique power system that seems even better than nen or stands So our main character has a stick attached to his body (which looks like a fish mouth for some reason, but its censored so you won't be able to see it) which shoots out ice cream like thingy but to activate that power he has to be turned on and somebody has to massage that stick to get the ice cream out. Just see how diverse it is from other battle shonen power systems. Overall, I would like to say that its the best anime I have ever watched. The anime industry is very biased and that's why Bnp hasn't received any awards. Otherwise, it could have been part of the “Big 3″ I Yash Pandey, a proud weeb, takes the pledge to recommend Boku no pico to every new comer to the anime world and I will encourage you guys to do the same. SHINZOU WO SASAGEYO!

Mridull
MridullLv11Mridull

I Loved this more from the original one. Story flow quite nice.

Lazy_Fox111
Lazy_Fox111Lv4Lazy_Fox111

It contains almost every reason why I tend to avoid most novels and fanfics written by Chinese authors. I'm sorry translator but it's not my cup of tea. It's clearly written with their people as their main audience rather than us foreigners.

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