Review Detail of Rizki_Caturianto in HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]

It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like the daily life/slice of life of MC/Albert and his interaction with his friends.. And I think he should be in Ravenclaw (he's smart and full of questions.. A Ravenclaw quality) than in Gryffindor.. He's have a system, he can upgrade his skill with system and do his quest/mission.. But why there's not much appearence of his system?? What I hate about him is, why he take the horcrux (Ravenclaw Diadem) with him to his dorm after the first time he got alert from his system (when he almost be corrupt/influenced by the horcrux).. It dangerous not only for him, but also his friends.. He should stay so far away from horcrux (he still first year and can't have a way to destroy it now).. My interest to read this story is down to drain after he take the horcrux (Ravenclaw Diadem).. It's dissapointing to see he's smart and always cautious, but still so stupidly be corrupted/influenced by the horcrux (and he knows about how horcrux can and will try to influenced him, but still go near it).. And he know he's different (maybe be influenced by horcrux), but still not return it, or tell Dumbledore quickly.. I really love this story at first, but I don't know if I'll read more after this.. It's so frustating really, to see the stupidity of MC/Albert about the horcrux.. I hope you back to make MC/Albert like before.. He's focused to his school/lessons and friends.. And don't involve with horcrux matters.. 🙏🙏🙏