Review Detail of EroSpatula in HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]

A pretty impressive amount of thought was put into this work. Normally, I like a bit more action in my stories but this is a refereshing change of pace. For those who tl;dr: Slice of Life in Harry Potter. The MC is the Twin Weasley age so Potter joins when the MC will be at his 3rd Year (which may possibly lead to him talking the place of Cedric Diggory.) Unlike other fanfic out there, the MC is a Gryffindor with lots of Ravenclaw traits, someone like Hermionie/Percy except less know-it-all and less stuck up. It’s been a little more over than a 100 chaps since the writing of this review (107) and boy is it hella slow, like hella slow that probably voldermort over there can resurrect himself 7 times over before the Author reaches writing the MC’s book experience in his 7th year of Hogwarts. And yes, there are info dumps on some, I would say, uncessecary information that plays a very small role in the scale of things. Info dumping was also unfortunately a thing but was removed in the later chapters and placed at the end of each chapter if you want to have a more in-depth dive on how the Author fleshed out the Harry Potter series. Also I would like to say, things that are meant to be important seem to pop up ever to when the plot is important, for example, the MC finally finds a horcrux in the form of the diadem and was enchanted by it and almost wore it until he heard the sound pings of the system going off. Yeah, he had a system, but I felt unimportant when it’s one of the key reasons he could catch up in Hogwarts. It seemed that I talked a lot of smack about this book but I actually think it’s a really good one. You can see the life of a Hogwarts student without an immortal bald man trying to kill a student every year, no phantom book unleashing a giant monster to kill students, no deranged criminal trying to kill a rat and etc. It’s very normal, and I like it that way. The side characters are super fleshed out and feels like actual people, they sometimes have their own feature chapters which I loved the Twins escape through the halls chapters. And just overall increase in quality of work as a kind of Slice of Life genre before the hectic 7 years of the chosen one