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Some useful information. #1 English is not even close to my main language, so don't expect good grammar, just something readable. #2 This fanfic, it's just something to pass the time, so I don't expect anything at the level of paid writers. #3 If you did not like the fanfic, just remove from your library. #4 Yes, the protagonist is not how you want him to be, and if you're feeling bad, write your own fanfic.

if you like Mc reincarnation who doesn't become himself and instead becomes a simp gilgamesh complex then this is for you. all good ideas at first but turn bad when MC is corrupted with gilgamesh's memory and it becomes like him instead. i wonder why so many 5 star spam reviews on webnovel do you guys have bad taste?. I'm going to guess there will be "hey guys this is a fanfic" thought, it's a cliché.

I have to say he who was able to kill a high class devil in just an hour was evenly matched after 9 year of training i don't see the reason why he should have system when you will nerf him. At the same time if he really even worked i am not taking about working hard he should be able to fight with Sairoge just because of his bloodline. I am just going to see how much you will nerf him. I don't even find any real review. Because everyone is so interested on Gil.

It's alright but a bit boring due to the usual op infinite wealth and system store combo. Don't bother with the first 15 chapters nothing relevant happens. Most of the story in the first 15 chapters consist of stats and skill spams, even then every few chapters they occur again there is no sense of game related progression as a result and makes that story mechanic look like an eyesore taking away time from the story. Neither does the mc decide to become a devil and make his own peerage which is arguably the only unique selling point of the DXD series, as every other selling point is done in other fandoms and much better. If you aren't or don't become a devil in DxD, it's like becoming a television guide maker in the world of pokemon after choosing to reincarnate there. DxD is like pokemon with people, you got a limited team size and you challenge the rating games together. That's essentially a Pokemon league setting with your captured pokemon. The other aspects are the usual DBZ type encounters that grand you an uphill struggle against ever more powerful oppnents and fight to watch each time... Thirdly is the ecchi harem component. Simply put, this fic doesn't make use of the three selling points of the DxD series, nor does it make use of the other selling points introduced in a meaningful manner. Its like watching a humor less one punch man series, ft an unbeatable gamer and little to no emotional anything. That's fine for many, but it is why I rate the story the was I did.

It's wasn't great at start but it's was pretty much Okey. But more it goes the worst it gets. Because in the latest chapters, author just like that *forget* some information and just like that start to follow Canon and make nonsense. Retarted nonsense out of this novel. Nothing new, I can handle it... No that's not even a mine problem. Oh no. In the latest chapter out prideful and mighty mc that like to imitate King of heroes catch a serious illness. Bipolarity. And my God, in one second this guy be a gilgamesh in another dumb chuni teenager - well done. Brilliant just brilliant. P. S. Some guys was pointing out in comments that author doesn't have ideas - and yep, that is the case. Because after those comments chapters become even worse. A fitting end for imitation like mc.

Author of this Fanfic, I hereby tell you that continue this Fanfic. Don't be discouraged because some people tell you it is bad or you have many mistakes, etc. Make them your stepping stone for improvement, many people always feel discouraged if this happens. So always acknowledge what people say about your mistake, and improve yourself from this mistake.

Sorry to be blunt, but isn't this fan-fiction too overrated? I mean, it's decent, but in my opinion, it isn't that good to be in the top 10. The MC in the early chapters have some kinda personality disorder where in one moment he says he's ruthless but in the next moment, he spares his enemy. The grammar isn't even that good. He even got editors and stuff that doesn't really change anything about the writing quality. Regarding what I think of the story development, I didn't even get past chapter 60, so I don't know about that. All of this is only my opinion as a reader. For those fans of this fan-fiction that got triggered by this review, I'm sorry, but I can only see this as a decent fan-fic and not at the level to be in the top 10.

Gilgamesh in DxD, nice concept and potential, but Big oof. Sadly Disappointed with the fight scene. The writing style is the big downside of this novel, author decide to overdetailed some useless information(Author can just use auxiliary chapters, but decide to infodump useless information on the chapter), but left the other scene(especially battle scene) with minimal effort, feels like reading diary. There's also some confusing word that doesn't make sense, and some inconsistency like skill name (ex: Devil Slayer of Lightning, then Lightning Devil Slayer). This is not about grammar anymore, more of the laziness of not proof reading it carefully before posting the chapter

I don't Know why this is even in the Top rated novels, it just seems kinda physically impossible considering what I read. The world building and some attention to details is decent but the Characters and Developments are infuriating. The pronouns for most times are ok but the Grammer is horrendous and most of the passages are butchered or outright copy-paste from other novels. The MC is Gilgamesh in Name only, his actions and though process scream underdeveloped and in a honest sense Beta, for ex. in 75ish chapter his girl is almost murdered by a priest who didn't want to continue the conversation and suddenly wants to speak after seeing mc and some powerful foes and what does he do? He welcomes him Inside and isn't even mad!!! That's my rant and opinion. If you want to read it my recommendation will be a big fat no.

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Author of this Fanfic, I hereby tell you that continue this Fanfic. Don't be discouraged because some people tell you it is bad or you have many mistakes, etc. Make them your stepping stone for improvement, many people always feel discouraged if this happens. So always acknowledge what people say about your mistake, and improve yourself from this mistake.

This is an embarrassment to every character involved in this story. There is too many info dump. 96% of every chapter is info dump. Gilgamesh is chadliest chad. A gigga chad. So mc in his previous world must have been one of those bottom of the food chain beta males that shout they are an alpha because even after getting mixed with Gilgamesh soul MC is the king of simps. all the five stars are given to author by his discord friends.

this novel is humiliating to Gilgamesh and, the only reason that I read it was for him and I have to say it, the despoilment that I feel is indescribable the MC is just a child who has gotten a wishes the is nothing in this novel related to Gilgamesh other than his ability nothing else

you want a review? this is my review. As a person who likes novels with the theme of reincarnation and crossing, I am a little disappointed here. because MC's original memory was erased. I myself liked Gilgamesh, but not the archer. I prefer casters because they are wiser than archers. And what really disappointed me was that this MC was greedy for Sacret Gear! he even stole Issei's Sacret Gear! here you author have ruined the plot that DxD fanfic likes. you should let Issei still have Boosted gear, and make MC stronger than Issei's boosted gear.

I have enjoyed it for the most part but my biggest issue is with the info dumps.. they are too common and too long! also character descriptions are to long and some times repeated. a short description is much better. I don't need to know there height and weight. over all it could be better with some work

sorry to write this kind of review. I usually like fan fiction novel this.e specially about DXD world where many plot is avaible. but the info dumb is too much even for me. maybe you should edited the info dumb part. so some people can skip or read the context with their own choice. hope you can make the Novel more good later.

other than character design and World Background which author using DxD world background and their design character also Type moon (so I must give credit to Type moon and DxD original author) very disappointed. all those first chapter are only for hype and then after knowing MC's personality butchered the whole hype. coward MC. you want to delete this ? nah I would post it again.

My honest self review writing quality:1 story development:2 character design:3 update stability:4 world background:2 this novel is wrong in so many level

too many unnecessarily long fights and mc op but even so his enemies always end up escaping, as for the harem I'm in chapter 165 and the mc doesn't have a single woman gg, I'll leave it up to you

The story is pretty good. The english is a little bit wonky but it's readable, just a few minor mistake here and there. But the main problem lies with the info dump every so often because of the description of the skills and items. There are like 2 paragraphs with 10 sentences each every item/skill. It also doesn't help that he gains like 10 skills and one chapter, making 2 chapters be a massive info dump. It makes keeping track of his skills and items pretty hard to track. It would be pretty convenient if the author added a status auxiliary chapter but I guess it's still too early.