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Gilgamesh in DxD, nice concept and potential, but Big oof. Sadly Disappointed with the fight scene. The writing style is the big downside of this novel, author decide to overdetailed some useless information(Author can just use auxiliary chapters, but decide to infodump useless information on the chapter), but left the other scene(especially battle scene) with minimal effort, feels like reading diary. There's also some confusing word that doesn't make sense, and some inconsistency like skill name (ex: Devil Slayer of Lightning, then Lightning Devil Slayer). This is not about grammar anymore, more of the laziness of not proof reading it carefully before posting the chapter