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Xudima
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The story is pretty good. The english is a little bit wonky but it's readable, just a few minor mistake here and there. But the main problem lies with the info dump every so often because of the description of the skills and items. There are like 2 paragraphs with 10 sentences each every item/skill. It also doesn't help that he gains like 10 skills and one chapter, making 2 chapters be a massive info dump. It makes keeping track of his skills and items pretty hard to track. It would be pretty convenient if the author added a status auxiliary chapter but I guess it's still too early.

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BrilliantDream
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Thanks for the review, as the novel was at the beginning I will need this intense information dump, but in the chapters ahead, it is no longer present.