That's one weak 'omnipotent' person imo.

Sorry to be blunt, but isn't this fan-fiction too overrated? I mean, it's decent, but in my opinion, it isn't that good to be in the top 10. The MC in the early chapters have some kinda personality disorder where in one moment he says he's ruthless but in the next moment, he spares his enemy. The grammar isn't even that good. He even got editors and stuff that doesn't really change anything about the writing quality. Regarding what I think of the story development, I didn't even get past chapter 60, so I don't know about that. All of this is only my opinion as a reader. For those fans of this fan-fiction that got triggered by this review, I'm sorry, but I can only see this as a decent fan-fic and not at the level to be in the top 10.

This fan-fiction is actually pretty decent. It's a good read for passing time. Maybe work on the grammar and it'll be perfect. I'm not saying that the grammar is unreadable, but it could do some work. The story development is great, a bit fast, but still pretty good from where it's going. Overall, I think it's a good wish-fulfillment type of fan-fiction.