Reviews of EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

A great story with a gripping plot and good writing style! The author's narration is very apt and detailed that readers can visualize the situations! Not too hard and boring to read but fun instead!!

Good writing. the author has a great potential and the novel as well, I like reading a adventure fantasy and this is giving. you brought different elements into this story which I like it, I hope you keep up the good work!

This Novel is very unique in it's own way with the character and the System involved in it, especially in the way the system goes off and challenges the MC the way it does. Very nice. There are a few mistakes in the beginning chapters I believe that could improve the writing quality a bit , but it's not something too off putting that would discourage viewing it. Characters as well as the World background are done well. The Story has a nice flow to it.

Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out but need more depth and I'm sure they'll get more in the future as the story progresses. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!

I like the way the story is written, and like that there are a bunch of elements brought together. it does get a bit confusing sometimes though... especially for a fast reader like me

The story is amazing and engaging. Also the writing style is really different than other novels I've read. Overall this novel is really amazing. Also respect for the author for writing for a year now👏🏻

I love the story from the first chapter. it's good written and also it's readers will not find it difficult to understand. Your on the way to succes. Good luck and keep this up.

This is very well written, pure fiction and good story lines. It's very entertaining with characters that keeps it engaging and colorful. I hope that the story progress more, keep up the good work

A unique take on the mix of elements and magical bloodlines. The story has potential with the introduction of the school and quests. Worth a read for fantasy fans.

I really liked the concept and background of your story. Your story is really different from the ones I have red so far. Keep it up. 💓💓💓

I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Eden, he is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!

An amazing work of art nonetheless! It was a mixed emotion of joyride and entertainment. I must tell future readers to check this one out! [img=recommend]

Thank you for this wonderful story. When I read tis story, this reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist and Harry Potter which I read. The different is that it has a system to make things clear. It is better than Harry Potter to me.

Wow! Good novel Author, I really liked what I just read! Eden's character felt good and I won't spoil here but the mystery, the school, the quests everything is really good which is making me wonder what will happen next! I am waiting for more chapters!! Highly recommended!

This story feels like nothing in particular, but for some reason I'm still really invested haha. Good job author, hopefully I'll eventually get through all 100 or so chapters...

The characters are something else, my god. The character writing is impeccable. I just love the mc and not to forget the story, it's so emirsive. Seriously great job.

It’s got an awesome world with boundless possibilities and a great main storyline. The prologue gives you a good idea of what he wants his future to be, but the way the story’s set up minimizes the chance of spoilers. All in all, a great work!

This is a really unique take on the usually repetitive and predictable system genre, and I really like it! I've read 10 chapters so far, and the MC seems really interesting and it's a breath of fresh air! There are a couple of grammatical mistakes here and there, but setting that aside, amazing story author! will def read more :D

Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out. The world background is perfect as well. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!