I have to say I didn't expect this to be as good as it was. I liked the characters and the action scenes they were pretty nice. The concept of what was written was pretty unique and 'hot' (lol). But I liked the relationship that built up with the characters the most. It sorta reminds me of something I can't put my finger on but either way, pretty solid and hooking. Before I knew it I was reading more and more. The only problem I had was really the transitions. sometimes they happen a bit 'too' fast. That sometimes threw me off. I know it is mentioned where they are going but it would be nice to see their arrival sometimes. That's the only thing from me, everything else hit's right. Good writing.

This is a Good story for what I have read. The story does move along at a slow pace which is not necessarily bad. The characters were introduced in a way that you would be able to get a picture of who they were and they had some good dynamics. This is the strong point. But I do need to address some of the Grammar as there is some I have to note. First of all, when you are writing for the dialogue you should stick to a tense for the characters. It can get confusing if you say ' Here is what happened, I went to the front and then I would slap them'(Just an example). It does not sound right so I do believe that this is an area which needs improvement as it can be seen many times. There are others that could be stylized better to incorporate a better Dialogue narrative as with some improvements, the dialogue could be amazing. Overall though, the Story dominates as it holds up the interest in the chapters and if you are willing to look past the mistakes you still have a story which can draw you in with well -rounded characters and nice world.

Great story. I like the idea the way it was put down with the time ability which made things interesting from the start. There are a few spelling mistakes throughout the chapters which can be noticed for a few words but it is not very frequent. While they don't take away from the story it is something that could be fixed by the Author with a quick review over their chapter. I was able to follow the plot well despite the many focuses on the system stuff and enjoyed it.

Now you see, I may be a little bias because this is some power I wanted myself but I should say that the writing is applied well in gaining this awakening of their power. It is good through and through . It does stake a few chapters to get off the ground and get into exploring the ability but it is fine when the story behind it keeps it flowing. It is something I intend to keep on reading and others should join me. Because it's cloning. Did I say how much I like the concept of clones? I know there is one famous cloning thing but now this looks like it could be the next. Interesting.

When I started reading this, I didn't know what to expect when I started reading. The Story gets into it taking a turn I did not expect to see and it was a wonderfully crafted scene that had great writing in the beginning. I enjoyed seeing the characters and their interactions towards this development. They were portrayed well. The Story takes a nice turn to it and I have to say it was enjoyable . As far as the style of writing, it has a unique style which set it apart from others with some spice over everything to make it nice.

This premise on healing was something I always used to think about before in that I had my mind on a story like this, and I saw healing stories before, but nothing like this which was quite unique in the way it went about it It made me curious about the Mc's ability and how far this would be capable of going. I know it has a few chapters to it but those few chapters were quite Good. the Author's Style has a unique style which one may say is like a poet but of a certain different blend to it and crafted the story in quite an artful way. I rather like the way they have started out. I have no doubt that in the future this will continue to be a great story.

Love the concept and the story's pretty cool. For the Characters I can say they were done well but unfortunately I don't think there is one that really gives a 'standout' feeling to me, which is fine as you don't get that with every story. Story is a nice concept but I do have to say in regards to the quality this is where I see a small thing here. At least for me. While I like the story, the style and grammar is also something that is just as important to consider. I believe this has style but I know that they can improve it as well as there are some Grammar issues ; however, I believe people will still enjoy the concept and the story you are crafting.

Suspense

This story was a nice read . The Author has their own style of writing which presents things with a clear picture and seems to blend an explanation with unique ways to show the characters and their development. The Quality of writing is top notch and it provides unique characters within it's setting.

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This felt like going inside of a chapter while still keeping the context of Story. It has good visual details pulling you into the Scene. It's very rainy in this story. I can relate with the characters and the humor as well. Very good job.

This has a unique way to tell their story. Author is pretty funny and that is enjoyable in it's own way.I especially like the characters. They were put in with good details while keeping the story flowing perfectly. It's a well written read. I look foward to seeing more of this.

The Execution!

This Novel is very unique in it's own way with the character and the System involved in it, especially in the way the system goes off and challenges the MC the way it does. Very nice. There are a few mistakes in the beginning chapters I believe that could improve the writing quality a bit , but it's not something too off putting that would discourage viewing it. Characters as well as the World background are done well. The Story has a nice flow to it.

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You may need to double check this sentence..

I don't think that why should be there.