Diving into this book is like stepping into a sea of magic, mystery, and unexpected alliances. The story follows a protagonist who's easy to root for, facing odds that seem insurmountable, with a blend of determination and vulnerability that's truly relatable. The dynamic between characters is charged with tension and unexpected turns, making their interactions a highlight. Without trying to spoil anything away, the journey includes thrilling challenges, growth in the face of adversity, and the exploration of themes like courage, identity, and the search for belonging. It's a compact adventure that packs a punch, perfect for anyone who loves a blend of action, fantasy, and heart.

Kind of...Alex's grandfather he couldn't use the box because only a special soul could do it, but he knew that Alex is that soul, and he guarded the box, so Alex can find it when the time comes...

I haven't thought of it, but yes... [img=faceslap]

I already know... Constant fights lead to toxic behaviours, so I am not staying in the conflicts. Just wanted to emphasize in grandfather figure and the impact he has in young Alex's mind.

Yes, in truth, there are clues for the future. Grandfather is an important figure which feed us with information.

I am glad you liked it, because the prologue is a bit different than what I am comfortable writing and in mind a bit weird the author having a role in the story. I wanted to give a more dramatic vibe because the story is a fairytale and in my mind I thought it needed a narrator.

Thank you very much for reading my story. I am glad you like it so far because it's an experimental story where I am trying to blend different things and I think it's a bit weird. I hope you'll enjoy the next of the characters.

Welcome back. I'm glad you liked it. I hope the following chapters to be to your liking as well.

Usually something that lets the reader think what the chapter is about. It's ok you can think about it and edit them later.

I'm really enjoying the dialogue between Mitsuhiro and Suzune. It's got a nice, natural flow to it, and the banter is engaging. I also appreciate how Mitsuhiro handles the situation with patience and understanding. It's a great way to build rapport between characters. Maybe you can use more eye-catching titles for each chapter that foretell what the chapter is about. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more of your story! 😊📖👍

Wow, a great chapter. Mitsuhiro's character is intriguing, and I can sense a lot of depth there. The contrast between the school environment and the hardships the students face is a great setup for tension and conflict. The scene where Mitsuhiro stands up against the bullies is awesome! It really shows his character's strength and determination. And that last interaction with the girl he saved leaves me with so many questions, in a good way! A small advice though, maybe you can divide or decrease the length of the two first paragraphs.

The growing darkness in the grove... Malgarn and he's minions are a threat to the world if Malgarn's shield broke.

Haha yes she is a scholar but this language here is the language of the forest and the spirits that nobody knows and a few keepers can understand

No not yet just one of the ancient trees of the grove.

This chapter is really picking up the pace, and I'm loving the dynamic between the characters. Yofiel's skills and their involvement in the party's journey add a new layer of intrigue to the story. And the Dragon's Domain? Sounds like a thrilling setting! You've got me on the edge of my seat, wondering what's going to happen next. Keep up the great storytelling! I can't wait to read the next chapter. 😄📖🔥