So far so good. Not seeing much gym stuff, but from what I read I guess things are still in development. World building maybe? Hmm… cool to see this world have some kind of magic that is still a mystery. Haha, everything is still a mystery! i like it!!

The writing and development is good so far. System/stats thingy seems to be meh, but its doable. Chapters are very short and paragraphs are very long in the first chapters. However this is no longer a problem in the later chaps. So good job author!!!

hmm

That's a bunch of information right there... Cough Cough(Im suffocating)

very action movie like

What a long title... Oh well, I've seen manga's that told the entire plot through the title lmaooo Anyway, this some good shi! Love it!!! I don't know how to describe it, but it feels quite deep.

looking to see them gains babbyyyyyyy. Good stuff, tragic beginning, stable development. legoooooooooo. cant wait for chap 1000!!!

I like it. The story has two of my favorite genres which I really like about this book! If author cou;d update more that'd be great!! Keep up the good work!!

Holee sheee! Cover is fire!! U-uhm! Definite read!! Good writing, and my fav genre too! Good stuff good stuff. Reviewing already cus this shi be bussin!! Upload more chaps already author!!!

Myths! I love myths! That's just what I was looking for!! The story is great so far, and the quality gets better and better! It'd be nice if it's better from the start though... Great job!! added to coll!

Good read Good read. Cute story, I like it. The only downside is the writing I guess, and the updates. But it's not that bad. Issa good. Issa good

I like the way the story is written, and like that there are a bunch of elements brought together. it does get a bit confusing sometimes though... especially for a fast reader like me

ah, I see. makes sense now why it seems similar to thos machine translated stories. good luck!😁 (check your forums)

Oohhhh! I was surprised to see the quality of this work after reading the review of the author. I expected it to be bad, but it's actually a gem. The first chapter feels like a scripture, adding a dramatic opening, while the next chapter tells the story like an adventure game! If only the author could update more frequent

Uhm.. You need to work on your writing a little more. It's good enough though, since I can at least follow the plot. But, simple mistakes as punctatuation, scene cuts, paragraphs, and pacing... It gives me the Ikk (Haha, see what I did there?) I do have to say though. You really do impressive on those updates! For readers like mtl readers, this might be a treasure trove!

I really do like the way the story is written. It feels immersive. Great start on the first chapter! The pacing gets a bit weird on some parts though, but it's not very noticible. Just, eh. Keep uploading more chaps pls!

I'm drowning in the amount of dialogues TT (I'm not used to it, sorry.) The chapters seem long too, which honestly, justifies the amount of uploads a month. So far, good potential for a comic maybe. would like to see how things develop ^^

Ooh, I like the clean looking writing style. Very good, since the system stats don't slap my face when I read haha! Development seemed to be good so far, and I hope that it doesn't end up generic. FF Also, I fear author might edge us later with chapter releases TT

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hahahaha!!