This is totally one of the best first chapters to a novel🙏🏻

but to warn you, it actually has a bad start. This first part of the novel will only have foreshadowings and details for the world. But, I can guarantee you that the ending sequence of this volume will be perfect👌🏻

obviously me

bro thanks this is what I needed 😭🙏🏻

let me be just continue the novel and tell me your opinions😭🙏🏻 (I know it's too early but give me your opinion atleast chapter 12)

😭🙏🏻 Dw bro I changed the way he speaks in the other chapters this was just back then when I was just planning out the novel

trust me bro it won't be confusing 😭🙏🏻 It'll make sense😭🙏🏻

what do you mean? there's no dialogue in this paragraph

Thanks broski I didn't noticed that😭🙏🏻

Thanks bro

thanks bro I'll continue to improve

Thanks for your mentorship bro I did all the things you taught me😭🙏🏻

Perfect Novel for a what if🔥🔥 Also the writing is better than most people tbh and the relationship of Kdj and Yjh is so cute🥺

The novel was great nove but the only thing probably bad about was the grammars and the writing, you should try to improve that. But the novel was not bad as well as the plots and characters. Great Novel🔥

The introduction was great as well the chapter

Great chapter and the dialogues see quite solid too

Great chapter so far but I recommend you to use Quillbot it's for grammar corrections and it can improve your grammar by a lot ❤️❤️

Great chapter so far

thank you but I will continue to improve

thank you actually I haven't read your novel yet but I will now cafe I've been talking to someone