CORNBRINGER
5 for writing quality and stability of updates, 3 for everything else.....its getting boring, like I know it's supposed to be a slow fic and I respect that but with locked memories trope + powers too dangerous to actually be used it just kinda feels like the MC is an inferior batman.....literally a chipmunk with magic could wipe the floor with him and it's been a 100 chapters. It would've been fine if the slice of life moments in between were good but the best joke so far has been Oliver Queen's mustache so this.....this just not it. I'd honestly rather you give this up and maybe work on the twilight: venom fic or something, at least that seems interesting.
Mediocre is the best I can describe it. Nothing differs from canon as it is a slight rehash of those events with similar outcomes. My main issue is how the author wrote this. The MC's memories are faulty at the most convenient of times. Where ROB has taken his long term memory and butchered it until the plot calls for it to become relevant. So we get arcs where the MC just 'remembers' what the big secret is through some hard core plot armor leading the way. So we are left in the dark concerning his actions until he rediscovers his 'missing' memory, I mean plot points where he no longer stumbles in the dark. Then we have the romantic interest who is 'raven', but it doesn't develop into anything as of c119. Where our MC will proceed to go full edgy mode with her wanting to tag along. However, this could've been avoided with a simple explanation of his future knowledge that would've prevented this disaster. But, I forgot the MC got some brain issues as the author loves his soap opera. Also did I forget that foreshadowing of deathstroke is way to obvious? Its almost as if the author wants the MC to join the villains at this stage. Not even trying to hide it as a an igneous alternative. Since we had over 20chps of batman going over this 'betrayal' plan in great detail. In other words, I think this review doesn't deserve a spoiler as everything written is too blatant to be left wondering of how the plot would unfold.
A bit meh. This story is more about psychology than super heroes. We're not following an insert with the powers of Black Bolt dealing with crime in DC in an OP way. We're following a dude that deals with being incredible depressed due to having the powers of Black Bolt and how he grows up while never using them. It would be better to describe this fic as an insert with minor super strength and resistance that is dealing with depression...in DC.
If you look at my Profile....you can see that I am a CORNBRINGER "Fan". I was there when He uploaded the first chapters of his first FF on Webnovel and, most of the time, I liked them. I didn't like the PJ one for personal reasons because I didn't like his " relationship" with Aphrodite...I, later on, learned that he killed her, so I like that ;) Anyways, I loved the first chapters and hope for more to come.....always a pleasure reading them. #CORNBRINGER, aye? RaRaRaRa
Overall, it was very frustrating. You give a guy an OP powerset and then feed him power piece meal. That along with thier being NOTHING else to this novel then fighting bad guys leaves alot of emptiness in the plot area.Then this is written like a mystery novel or should have been if you wanted to write a Dark Kinght style fanfic. But there is no real mystery. No, who done it. Last but not least, why are you modeling someone who is supposed to be as strong as Superman off batman. Makes no sense. I came for someone with the powers of Black Bolt, but what i got was a batman knock-off.