Unravell
I'm a man of taste and the taste cannot be quenched by mediocrity.
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Unravell9mthPostedI thoroughly enjoyed this novel as the mc isn't op which most one piece fanfics continue to do. the frequent updates are also an extra bonus, however, there are certain aspects that brought the story down. Firstly, whilst some may not mind it, the constant referencing to his adventures with prostitutes left a bad taste in my mouth and I also see lots of the same stuff I noticed when reading "A gamer in south blue" (could be my delusions acting up though). But overall I loved it so thank you.
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Soccer... Dropped.
Klein's emotions settled down as he recalled his past on Earth. He recalled how he liked exercising, his father who always spoke loudly, his mother who enjoyed busying herself despite having a chronic disease, his friends who grew up with him, going from playing sports like soccer and basketball to games and mahjong, as well as the person he made a failed confession to… These were like a silent river; it did not have many ripples or deep sentimental feelings, but it silently drowned his heart. - Unravell1yrCommentedCh 29 CHAPTER 25
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And at last, for the very first time. No one laughed when they heard his name. (A/N: Press F in the chat.) - Unravell1yrCommented
David right now:
"I know, I know," I nodded, my shoulders tensing as my hands moved to reply, my eyes glancing at her. "But I can't let this go. Something about it… doesn't feel right," I added, signing quickly, while giving her a warm smile. - Unravell1yrCommented
Cry in the shower to hide the tears.
I want to scream and cry. Blame someone, but I stay calm for now. At least until I get home to cry in the shower. - Unravell1yrCommentedMy parents are dead.
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If you had said soccer instead of football I would have stopped reading within a heartbeat.
Look at football, for example. Many people train just as hard as Messi or Ronaldo, but in the end, they don't even come close to their level. - Unravell2yrReplied to Zianna
You have no taste.
'What's this? This is exciting. So exciting!' thought Lia as she looked at the girls with interest. - Unravell2yrReplied to KonekoLover
You have gained my respect.
'What's this? This is exciting. So exciting!' thought Lia as she looked at the girls with interest. - Unravell2yrReplied to Panda_Stories
So there won't be any chance of someone like Hela being the final love interest.
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Well, all I can say is that I've enjoyed reading this so far. I have got a question for the author if they are reading this Has the main love interest been introduced? P.S: It may be just me but I don't feel like Emma is best suited for the MC but in the end it is up to you.
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